pretty detailed start, cracky. Good use of English too.
She had taken a long day of hunting and searching for resources and food for her village people, it only made sense that she had to take a temporary rest, only that, it was late.
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It's not the last paragraph but the title of "The Concentra" fits because its an end to a new beginning, I suppose.
Logbook #027 - The Concentra
War of the Two Kinds
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