Weird argument between the author and their own character
A was momentarily stunned, not expecting the apology. "It's too late, you know. I have no need to give you power, and I've been giving it to you for free, and you abuse me in return. Fuck you, man."
Template system in High school : DXD
Anime & Comics · white_poison
You really need a proofreader
The guards watched Jin leap towards them, time seeming to slow as the one they were sent to kill drew first blood.
The guard watches as jin jump in between them time to seem to slow for them as the one they were supposed to kill as jump in between yet the first drop of blood drop from their side .
Template system in High school : DXD
Anime & Comics · white_poison
This wasn’t expressed at all in the dialogue had
Rias's sigh was quiet but edged, her crimson eyes narrowing as she recalled the exchange. "He answered nothing directly. Every time I pressed, he sidestepped. And by the end…" Her fingers tapped the armrest once before stilling. "…I realized I was the one accommodating him." Her tone cooled. "It was… vexing."
Template system in High school : DXD
Anime & Comics · white_poison
I think the system rejected the idea of any part of him being full indestructible. But Wolverine can fully heal from almost nothing so kinda not really a nerf
Template Accepted: Wolverine (Pre-Adamantium Skeleton)
Template system in High school : DXD
Anime & Comics · white_poison
Why hasn’t he used his new template at all?
Jin's — instincts take over. He try to block . But the strength difference is a chasm now. Toji shrugs it off, grabs Jin's arm, and throws him down the hallway.
Template system in High school : DXD
Anime & Comics · white_poison
I’m gonna be honest chief. AI did nothing to help your grammar in this paragraph
He has been a loner when she first try to befriend him he gave her a cold shoulder and i thought by seeing me being friend with a loner would help her image and he give a cold shoulder to her , to her . Now he wants my help .He had nothing to offer me thought fubuki.
Template system in High school : DXD
Anime & Comics · white_poison
First time in a very long time I’ve had to look up a word
"So it's experiential.
Template system in High school : DXD
Anime & Comics · white_poison
Did he also get like a basic understanding or extreme talent with his ability? It’s been a day or less then that
He spun, his Seismic Sense telling him the first goblin was still struggling, the second limping. He stomped, sending a wave of vibrations that made the ground RUMBLE. The two remaining goblins shrieked, disoriented, their weapons clattering as they lost balance. He seized the opportunity and formed a small, sharp rock spike near the first goblin's head, then quickly retracted it, leaving the creature stunned. For the limping goblin, he created a sudden dip in the floor, sending it sprawling again.
Highschool DXD : I'm Motohama with Gacha System
Anime & Comics · Opeler
Did he just lose all of his previous progression? Tf is happening
Template system in High school : DXD
Anime & Comics · white_poison