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the story revolves around a very interesting concept, honestly, it has a lot of potential, you just need to polish your writing skills a bit more and correct some lines to make it a 10/10, other than that, you are very creative!
Fantasy · Leon_Kingraph
This is an amazing way to understand how a person that is new to the world and to their own feelings struggles through their life and finds ways to move forwards despite their disability. very emotive and nice read
LGBT+ · Laiba
The narrative of the story is very intriguing, creating a lot of mystery and drawing the reader in for more, I have to admit I didn't expect the story to start how it did, but I'm really glad I continued reading to find out more about Ryan.
Horror · nia94
It is a very heavy story to digest if you are not into horror-like books, however for the lovers of thrill and tragedy, this is one perfect story to read, it packs a lot of emotions and scenes that will make your heart leap. definitely a good read.
A very mesmerizing story, it could improve in some parts but other than that the imagination and dedication put into it is amazing, truly a wonderful story!
Fantasy · NakhariSong
It is a very interesting story showing the growth of the main character and her relationship with those close to her, it really hits close to home in some parts and I really enjoy reading it, a very good job from the author!
Teen · CodeyVanilla
A very solid character personality through the story, I must remark the detail put n the thoughts on the main character makes her more desirable to read and intriguing, and a marvelous way to use key actions and words to make the scenes more interesting, simply amazing!
Urban · AthenaWilliam
I have to admit I didn't expect such quality of writing. This is a very great story with an inviting start, foreshadowing what could be one great scene to read, the excitement and joy pumped me up and I couldn't stop reading. This is an incredible story!
Fantasy · pingu61
The story starts very catchy and mysterious, it lures you to read more to find out what is going on and really adds a very interesting factor of backtracking in order to complete the time skip, it was a very clever move, I like it very much
Teen · Sadistangel026
This is a very descriptive story and all the characters have a strong personality, luring you to read even more to know what will happen next. Bringing the daily issues of a CEO and putting you in their personal lives. This is a very nice story, and the author has a great skill in giving details to define the background and characters.
Urban · Karen Wan
Honestly, I had to read more and more to clear some doubts in my head, in the first chapters I can see the sorrow and some mystery the main character goes through which made me continue reading. A nice story.
Urban · stridelight
I've come across many stories of the same genre, but this one really caught my attention given the prowess it develops on the main character, making me want to read more and more, truly amazing use of words and emotions.
Urban · foxyash
the cover was the first thing that caught my attention, a very nice one indeed, the story in general shos the expression of the author and makes you want to read more every time, the author did a great job!
Fantasy · Mary Algen Guiang
The struggle presented in the story based on the decision of the main character adds the needed spice for it to trigger the emotions to be captivated by the story. very pleasant to read, a wonderful job!
Urban · Jo_J
The story captivates the reader with the emotional explosion presented in the beginning using a relatable topic for a vast amount of people dealing with an issue they can't freely speak off given the society we live in. I love the lead and the description of the characters, the 3rd person perspective that the author uses is very creative.
Teen · Tailrs ink
This is quite a lovely story where I can feel the emotions of the main character slowing through the time she spends with the different situations and with the different people she is with, It really warmed my heart with the very first chapter.
Urban · MUHACHE_JUMA
Quite a very impressive beginning as I started reading this story, the personality of every can be easily perceived as the author explains their thoughts in a very organized way, also explains the struggle of doctors trying to deal with a wide amount of different people and their problems. I'm loving this story.
Horror · Misan Akuya
Marvelous work on the pov situations truly shows the detail and expression of the characters. As an addition, I love how powerful the main character is, and how simple her parents dealt with it, I found it pretty funny and interesting.
Fantasy · L_stellaluna
Truly masterful, it got me caught up in the very beginning and I couldn't stop reading, the writing style and the detail into the characteristics of the situations are simply amazing, a very great read
Urban · 4Maggievasiredz
It has a very unique start, honestly, I like how the author pours a lot of effort into the personality of the characters, they mesh together to form a variety of emotions that are described accordingly by every sentence, I can see the potential this story has, and it is amazing!
Eastern · MinLin
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the story revolves around a very interesting concept, honestly, it has a lot of potential, you just need to polish your writing skills a bit more and correct some lines to make it a 10/10, other than that, you are very creative!
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Fantasy · Leon_Kingraph