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Lazarus_alstine
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Moments 36
quit critiquing when you're not an author 馃槝馃槝馃ぁ
This is the reason why Shye resolved himself to help her keep up with him.
Flashy Adventurer System : Show Off to Get Stronger!
Fantasy 路 Meowder
Again, correct use of tenses. It is at most, a run-on sentence due to two separate but related topics
Shirley is talented,聽however, it's just that, her talent pales in comparison to Shye but with a little help from him, Shye believed that she would be able to keep up.
Flashy Adventurer System : Show Off to Get Stronger!
Fantasy 路 Meowder
no, it is correct use of tenses in this statement, and it's always easier to tell an author that they're wrong when you don't publish anything 馃槈 馃槝
There are still three days left before the competition starts and all the registration stuff has already been finished by Dean Snowcrest.
Flashy Adventurer System : Show Off to Get Stronger!
Fantasy 路 Meowder
in small quantities, salinity over 15% will dehydrate you
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Flashy Adventurer System : Show Off to Get Stronger!
Fantasy 路 Meowder
Both
"You fucking idiots! Are you trying to kill a single Spirit King or destroy my city?!" Patriarch Liang immediately screamed at the Spirit Emperors out of anger.
Cultivation Online
Games 路 MyLittleBrother
that's how you instantly have a 7th order passive
Cooking (Second Order level 5)
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
if those two weren't based on percentages you'd be right
[The positive and negative effects of your skill Blood Berserker's Wrath become three times more powerful].
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
Difference between penetration power and stopping power
"You are right about the bullet. It's not a bone or steel bullet, but a mana bullet." Tang Shaoyang glanced at the eight dead bodies. Four people died with their heads exploded, and the remaining four had a hole with seven centimeters in diameter on their foreheads. Weird enough, the smaller gun caused the head to explode while the sniper gun just left behind a hole. The sniper should have more firepower than the smaller gun.
Armipotent
Fantasy 路 HotIce
and it's my comment that's rude [img=recommend]
Knowing full well where he was Goggin, she had decided to head to the auction house. At first, she wanted to go alone, but the others had decided to follow. As the old man had said, with a shower and a new set of clothes, not a single person knew they were the same slaves as yesterday.
My Dragon System
Fantasy 路 JKSManga
one helping of extra spicy diablo sauce
This was Arnold's revenge. Some believed revenge was a dish served cold. However, according to Arnold, each dish required it's own unique preparation. And this time, the dish was to be served while it was fiery hot. Hotter than hellfire.聽
The Rise Of A Porter
Fantasy 路 AkshatArpit
stronk but mana
In fact, Luo Ning's words turned out to be very true. Therefore, her path of evolution was that of a melee warrior but instead of fighting alone she relied on her summons; the major difference between Luo Ning and the other summoners Bai Zemin had met so far was that she would not become a fish out of the water waiting for death in case her summons were destroyed as her own power could not be underestimated.
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
Highly unlikely, we in reality don't even have a truly sustainable plant based diet. Vegans actually kill more thing than they save to farm one crop that take from another living thing because other than that there are no other living things field. At least with meat you won't have rabbit starvation or kill half planet to farm inefficiently.
Bai Zemin hoped that this matter would be settled in the higher stages or otherwise it might present some problems.
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
relaxing a bowstring is different from releasing
Inact shouted the name of three skills at the same time and the strange arrow in his hand took on a slight sandy yellow hue before shooting off at full speed as his grip on the bowstring relaxed.
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
"I see." Bai Zemin nodded. "I probably won't leave for about a week. I plan to make weapons and armors for quite a few people so it will take me some time. Make sure everyone knows the rules and in case not someone doesn't adhere to them... You know what I mean."
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy 路 XIETIAN
nothing just my regularly scheduled broadcast of genocide
"It's nothing serious. I saw many people getting killed. That's all."
Cultivation Online
Games 路 MyLittleBrother
I can her carrying that thing one handed
The following morning, they loaded the small luggage into the limousine while Meixiu effortlessly carried the piano into the truck rented by Sebastian, shocking the pedestrians with her absurd strength.
Cultivation Online
Games 路 MyLittleBrother
If a mile wide river is small I don't want to see a large river
Beneath was the small five thousand feet wide river.
The Bloodline System
Fantasy 路 TimVic
I don't drink
Deductions have been doubled
I Transmigrated Into a Human Experiment
Fantasy 路 Lazarus_alstine
chill bro
After paying for the rooms of he went to look for the guys and girls himself. It was a rather unusual style for him, but all he could do was to use his dragging eyes and at the same time ask people from the inns and tavern if they had seen anyone.聽
My Dragon System
Fantasy 路 JKSManga
usually the klan meetings ease you in with a barbecue
"Ladies and gentlemen, I proudly present our first item for today, a drop-dead gorgeous slave!"
Flashy Adventurer System : Show Off to Get Stronger!
Fantasy 路 Meowder