Man I gotta say this a good one. I'm waiting for future updates. I can say that from a readers perspective this is a novel where even a first time readers(like those that have just started reading LNs) can put themselves in the universe. There can be some improvement in the introduction of characters like some 2-3 lines in the beginning for the elder sister and the mother as they came out of nowhere. All in all this is one of the rare novels which I think can be good for both binge-reading or a chapter a day. I can sense some potential from it that's why I'm posting a review. Sorry can't give donos as I'm still a student but will try my best to support you. Keep up the good work 👍🏻👍🏻and I would wish to read it further. I giving you a 3 for the update stability but will change it if it gets regular updates and also I didn't see any fatal error in writing so good for you. I know that you are your own author but pls don't add a cliche like the MC saving a girl and then the girl getting head over heels for the MC but some subtle romance, if any P.S. I came from 'mangakakalot' so don't think that no one's reading your comment.
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Man I gotta say this a good one. I'm waiting for future updates. I can say that from a readers perspective this is a novel where even a first time readers(like those that have just started reading LNs) can put themselves in the universe. There can be some improvement in the introduction of characters like some 2-3 lines in the beginning for the elder sister and the mother as they came out of nowhere. All in all this is one of the rare novels which I think can be good for both binge-reading or a chapter a day. I can sense some potential from it that's why I'm posting a review. Sorry can't give donos as I'm still a student but will try my best to support you. Keep up the good work 👍🏻👍🏻and I would wish to read it further. I giving you a 3 for the update stability but will change it if it gets regular updates and also I didn't see any fatal error in writing so good for you. I know that you are your own author but pls don't add a cliche like the MC saving a girl and then the girl getting head over heels for the MC but some subtle romance, if any P.S. I came from 'mangakakalot' so don't think that no one's reading your comment.
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