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I have a question, you said that this would be part of the Pause Systems Universe but the timelines in the descriptions don’t match up for the beginnings of the awakenings.

Although the story is good, you can get bored of it rather easily if you read through it extremely fast like I did. So if you’re just starting it I’d recommend that you take it slow and just enjoy the story over a long while.

This feels real rushed and I don’t think the story was put together very well.

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He may be a sheep, but it can add a bit of humor to the storyline.

I have loved the story so far and I’m only starting. I hope you continue your amazing story, and I would definitely recommend this to anyone else.