what about this one? hehe
"Move it!! What are you guys afraid of? It's a big rock that's slightly bigger than the mountains that I used to punch for practice!" Garp roared and leaped towards it.
Anime & Comics · FanficMortal
LOL
Hephaestus: "Non-crafters in my familia are normally tasked with scouring the dungeon for specific monster drops that we'd rather not have to pay another familia for.If you join us this kind of task is what you'd be signing up for. The lower the floor the better the item and the lower the floor you can get to the better discounts you'd get from our craftsmen, of course, if you provide the materials it would drop that much further, how does that sound to you. Also, I'm going to need to see those designs you want to commission of course."
Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
lol, I think he mixed his novels up, thinking it is "I am in Hollywood" by Laqi
CUT TO BLACK.
Movies · TC_Liyanage1
meh, I wish I didn't remember this lol
and I am alive... lol.
Then the blood-soaked knight approached me and explained that some bandit attacked us And ser Winters just killed them one by one with just a single swing of his sword.
TV · Kagetanehiruko
Mr. author, you nerfed the MC a little too much... and it's not about the "balance" or anything, which IMO I don't think it should even exist in the first place when it comes to novels like these, which are all about being IMBA. and the mana became just useless even tho it is the biggest cheat he has and you used it a little only at the end. and the free stat points... I don't know if you ever played games, but the level-ups give you FREE stat points so that you can make your own build FREELY, not so that you leave them sitting and only use some when you are about to die or think it is time, this is not how it works... might as well make your system like: leveling-up gives stats that are chosen by the system (like "all stats are up by 2 points/ STR is up by 3... etc) and we will all have the same build in these kinds of games, which would ruin the game so like the bell test of Kakashi and how it was used wrongly which our MC pointed out, you are using the system in the wrong way too. you are treating Free stat points as outside help, or something bad, even tho he got them by the level-ups, so it should be his own power that he didn't use... take it this way, the people around your MC also level up, but they don't get FREE points, they just get points, that are used depending on the direction they have been going, MC is special because he got the choice to use them in whatever he wants, yet he doesn't, you see how stupid this is? that's why sadly, I didn't enjoy it that much even tho it was well written, it's like looking at a smooth white wall yet that annoying red brick is sticking out ruining the whole picture for you. I hope you don't take my comment the wrong way, just wanted to comment something that express what I didn't like and hopefully help you, I didn't want to just comment "I didn't like it" and go away. anyways, I am enjoying the story, just hope you give these things more thought, which hopefully make your story better. and sorry if my comment is too long, just thought I better give more explanation because I'm genuinely enjoying your story. all the best.
Now I'm dying to know the verdict. Did you guys enjoy it? Or Do you think it's lacking something? Comment without holding back. This will make me want to try even harder for the next fight.
Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
lol, exactly what I felt. sadly this was written before wano arc I think, so I don't think he can use that kind of attack that he used against luffy.
Ross thought about it and finally put the 100 Proficiency Points in Haoshoku Haki.
Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar
bruh. lol... and not to mention he didn't get any point for the golden lion... sigh
With the flash of light, the data of Neji Neji no Mi increased to 900 points, which is only 100 points away from the final 1000 point Maximum Value mark!
Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar
"Big news! This is the exclusive big news!"
Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar
and the fact that even if he defeats everyone on the sea he still won't unlock all of his talents... lol. because he can only get 1 or 2 free talent points from one group of people so... not to mention how little the points he get after the first kill, I honestly don't know why the author even bothered to put the system in the story and might as well just let him practice it normally, a cheat being restricted is a stupid idea.
A golden glow flashed as the Proficiency of the Neji Neji no Mi reached 300 points. At the same time, the Gravity Distortion branch became green's activatable state and the activation conditions were also displayed, requiring 3 Free Talent Points.
Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar
Moby gave a smile. He didn't want to see Ross join the Marine, but the Headquarters asked him to come and ask him. It is good that Ross himself refused.
Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar
I like easy-to-use people like him so it ain't really wrong
'It was pretty easy to get close to him since he has a crush on Isa… Such a simp lord, he revealed confidential information that might hurt a child... I like easy to use people like him.
Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
more like; I would be running the fuck away... I would be too worried about being next to give a shit how he did it, lmao.
Then the blood-soaked knight approached me and explained that some bandit attacked us And ser Winters just killed them one by one with just a single swing of his sword.
TV · Kagetanehiruko
This is getting boring; I keep going back to the last chapter to reread the end every time you post a new chapter, trying to remember the story because you've been taking too long. I've written a novel (still in progress), so I understand how difficult it is to write, especially when you lose inspiration or motivation. However, there's a difference between losing inspiration and motivation to write a good chapter and simply finding a way to drag it out more. Please do better for the sake of people who paid you for it. It is better to give a rushed ending than just dragging it out too much to the point of not even knowing where to go from there, which will lead to you dropping the novel.
ch 229 Blackbeard Pirates
Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack
Anime & Comics · FanficMortal