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Your writing style has definitely improved. The writing at the beginning of the book was a bit… scattered? Like you were writing things down when then thoughts hit your brain. There was nothing wrong with this however it made it feel like I was reading in figure eights. It was a tab confusing but an overall fun ride. Now, on the other hand, it is much more organized. Reading is easy to do and very enjoyable. I quite like the feeling of it being told from the author’s view rather than a standard third-person. I also quite enjoy the descriptions we get however sometimes it gets a bit lengthy and feels more like filler at that point, for example when describing the big villain boss behind Guo Ying. The description of everything is very nice but too much can be detrimental to the fluidity of your story. After all, too much of a good thing is no longer considered a good thing. Overall, I really enjoy this novel along with the little glossary at the end of chapters every now and then. I also like the authors’ notes that we get. I enjoy seeing the main character and his strengths yet I also find it nice reading about the weaknesses and his ability to set boundaries, which is something I envy do to my lack in such an ability. Thank you for all your hard work author, I really like this novel. Thank you for every last letter you put out. Don’t forget to take care of your health and don’t be afraid to take a break when you need it!

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I wanna know who’s rating these things.

But, there really was nothing to be done about this. This director, Cao Meng– she was relatively new and only shot a few unrated web series beforehand. This was her first try at a rated work, that too also for a script written by an unrated script writer. And, the script was only rated as bronze-0.5 star not to say the least.

How To Be A Superstar

How To Be A Superstar

Fantasy · TravellerSoul

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I reccomend removing one of the ‘at this point’ because having it back to back, despite being in different sentences, is very reduandant and makes the paragraph hard to read.

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Maiden Of The Splitting Moon

Maiden Of The Splitting Moon

Fantasy · ARGAS

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She got 50k from catching the kidnappers!

After Xiao Lingyu gave them half a year of rent, she pondered and went to buy a tricycle that could move through the small alleys. She spent almost all the money she brought. Xiao Lingyu didn't ride the tricycle home. She kept it at the rental home. 

Farming Space Makes Me Rich

Farming Space Makes Me Rich

General · Lilac in May

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4 Fatty 5 Yun Hu 6 Lin Feng 7 Wu Linyao (or something like that) 8 Yaoyao

"Tank, go forward, Yaoyao and Coco come closer, one to my back and the other watch out for ambush at the left, Lin Feng, conceal yourself once we start, attack the sorcerer at the bottom lane."

National School Prince Is A Girl

National School Prince Is A Girl

Teen · Zhan Qishao

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Sister, I would assume.

This time, the black-shirted passenger received an order from the United States to get rid of the Young Master Cheng who was in the way.

Transmigrated as the Tortured Female Lead's Daughter

Transmigrated as the Tortured Female Lead's Daughter

General · A Crescent Moon

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Weight on her conscience. Tell me: there is a movie theater. You have two options, buy the ticket or sneak in through the side door and watch the movie illegally. What would you do?

Zi Yi quickly placed her bet. Earlier on she had hacked into the banking system to create a new account for herself using a fake name. This way, she could avoid trouble when she won.

Reincarnation: Multi-skilled Goddess Is So Beautiful!

Reincarnation: Multi-skilled Goddess Is So Beautiful!

Urban · Prosperity Every Year

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I think they meant quality.

Although Wendy's grade was higher than the Burial Poison Viper, the Burial Poison Viper's venom would still be beneficial to Wendy.

Fey Evolution Merchant

Fey Evolution Merchant

Eastern · Amber Button

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Gates*

You have entered the Dungeon Boss, Red Ogre's lair. It has noticed your presence. Defeat it to survive and return to the real world.

The Summoner's Rebirth: Awaken, Milady

The Summoner's Rebirth: Awaken, Milady

Fantasy · illeannne

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