Thanks for the chapter author. Keep it up!!!
ch 0 6 Chapter 6- Beast? Enemy? or...
Anime & Comics · Tushar_Vashishta
Great. This chapter is nice, the explanation of his training, his power, and the way you writing this was nice, so far i dont see any fault in your writing so keep it up author this fanfic is nice. MORE CHAPTERRRRRR PLEASEEEE (I enjoy it) :)
ch 0 5 Chapter 5- 5 Years of Fruits
Anime & Comics · Tushar_Vashishta
Well because the story already start more than hundred of years before issei plot so i think you must think about yokai that not exist anymore in kyoto, then i think you should make a base or representative office of NOX in the earth. Then arrange story before the issei plot like what nox do when old and new demon faction fight each other then when bible god seal the trihexa what nox do, then make side story or different pov of citizen in nox. Well this is just my opinion so dont think too much about it because i can also wrong. Btw thanks for the chapter
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I think for now just stick with dxd.
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Dont mind the haters let their fckng NEET toxic mind write whatever they want. Btw keep it up author you did a great job.
ch 0 -6 My Take on the plot and some false information
Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
Thanks for the chapter, this chapter is good.
ch 67 Beast Horde
Anime & Comics · Black_Paladyn
Thanks for the chapter!!!
ch 0 4 Chapter 4 - Dangers of the Island and Beginning Training
Anime & Comics · Tushar_Vashishta
Well because in sage realm youkai exist so i think yasaka will be logical. But the decision is yours.
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Thanks for the chapter And for the love interest i think i cant decide it because you are not yet to reveal the character in your story and if i give you random girl i afraid it will ruin the story or make the story seems forced so i cant decide it.
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Yes new chapter, thank you author. If i may give some advice because there a typo when greek final decision say (no, alliance ~ ~) there is a comma after word "no" that make me confuse a bit but still manage to understand the conclusion about it so more careful, keep it up author and thank you.
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Yes me too i was looking forward for them Hahaha
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Yes you right, keep it up authorr
ch 0 3 Chapter 3- Getting Used to it
Anime & Comics · Tushar_Vashishta
Thanks for the chapter
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Keep it up authorrrrr i like it
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Well i think still to early too jugde that because this is author real first chapter and i think author will show more pov of citizen and another fraction so we can learn what happened from after war ended. The plot i think will be more and more advanced in more chapter that will come.
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Keep it up author
ch 0 2 Chapter 2- Abandoned Island!!!
Anime & Comics · Tushar_Vashishta
I agree, the power of jade emperor is enough and doesnt need system or something similar like that. I prefer hardworking than system.
DxD: Jade Emperor [ Completed ]
Anime & Comics · Retro_