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Fuck, Naruto is eleven years old and this woman is almost thirty. Tsunami could be sentenced to eight years. I'm so fucking disgusted, I can't believe it. I'll try to pretend the last two chapters don't exist. I won't even read the last one

"From one prison, the main character ended up in another, cool. Author, just admit you’re too lazy to come up with a plot."

I didn't understand at all. Like, everything that distinguishes her from a normal person at first glance is her white skin, some inserts on the joints and... that's all. So where does such discrimination come from? If you touch her, she's firm, the end. But she's a beautiful girl, doesn't require any special care. Either the author made up the problem out of thin air, or I'm an idiot.

Who cares what others think when death is hanging over you?

what is the problem of deliberately disqualifying yourself and simply not participating?

I completely disagree with the logic of this chapter as well, because, as we understood from previous chapters, Shoto's father loves him very much, and he told him that he would always be on his side. So what if he concealed his abilities? Is it really such a weighty reason to reject his beloved son? I don't believe it. This resentment feels completely contrived. The illogicality of it all is just infuriating. I don't even want to continue reading because that was the only thing I liked in this story. The beauty of their father-son relationship, the strength of their bond, made me happy, and I thought, 'This is what parental love means.' But here, a small stone is thrown into the garden, and they decide to abandon the entire plot. Not to mention the inconsistency in Shoto's behavior... In short, it's business as usual

This reminded me of My Little Pony, a cartoon about a music festival, LOL."

"To be honest, it's like all three of them – the father, grandfather, and mother – abandoned James alone without any supervision in a life-threatening situation. It's ridiculously stupid. It was like, 'Hey! A dangerous gang of lunatics is attacking people, so we'll go save others, ignoring our son/grandson, and send him into the woods with some random kid.' Seriously, what sane parent would let an eleven-year-old run alone in the forest in a life-threatening situation? If they wanted to help others, they should have left him with some familiar adult or had his mom go with him, while dad and grandpa went to help. And then, when their son almost died in the woods, they sit there surprised and angry at him because why? Because he moved away from the crowd that almost trampled him or because he didn't just blindly run forward? Well, in short, this situation is complete nonsense."

I know they're 13 years old, and the author portrayed it perfectly. But that doesn't mean they'll stop annoying me, just like any other kids, really

Harry's friends really annoy me. Seriously, they behave like little kids, always dissatisfied with everything, constantly complaining to Harry: 'Harry, we're not kids anymore, we're 13 and a half. So, we want to play adult games with you.' How dare they get angry and offended when they ruined everything themselves all along? If I were Harry, I would just yell at them and put them in the corner

the main character became Vanga, but he was not struck by lightning

So far, everything is going quite well. The idea is not bad, especially with Enderman's abilities. The only thing I'm afraid of is that it might turn into an unoriginal Harry Potter with some extras, so to speak. It's not necessarily a bad thing, but I fear the author might add too much, and in the end, it could become a complete mess that's impossible to understand and read. Like, 'Harry Potter has a sister, Ron is a girl, Hermione is a dragon's daughter, Dumbledore is Grindelwald's lover, and in the end, there's a portal to Narnia will open, and the main character blasts off into space.' I hope the author doesn't abandon this fanfic and wish him good luck!