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Never meant for it come off pretentious or anything, I’m not some professional reviewer nor do care to be one, if you see it as such then that’s your opinion, I’m mostly towards bias since i still had problems with the story I still overall like reading it, anyways i done responding to comments, I see no reason debating about ratings

The story is great,the writing is so are the characters as well. I still have few issues with story such as the system I felt like it didn’t even needed to be added in the story it’s sorta take me out the story especially in semi realistic world like modern family, the whole drama with the mom not being there is too damn forced and in my honest opinion should just be ignored. Other than those few issues I had with the story is definitely a good binge read to anyone who a fan of the show or is a casual reader

Bro it’s a fanfic it ain’t that deep, it’s at 7 chapters at the moment, i rate the story gave my opinion on it end of story, it you want to read too deep into my review then go ahead, I never stated my opinion as fact

The story is good but not for me, the Mc feel abit too much like a Gary stu but at same time not. The drama just felt very forced, like I understand trying make the Mc more human and express more but reading felt very forced there’s was no natural progression towards making the Mc more it just happens for no reason no build up it sorta just killed the story for me personally It’s a good read just not me personally

The story is good but i do think the story lack abit of character interaction. Haven’t noticed any problems with the writing personally, so far I like the story really can’t say much since there’s few chapters. Overall I like reading it

Story good but Mc is sorta unlikeable for first few chapters to me, the grammar is good, my issue with the story is its starts off slow for first couple of chapters and how the Mc act at times, there’s not much I can really say that’s bad about it, just pacing of story can be slow i guess. Other than that I don’t have any problems with the story it’s a good binge read

Bro if you actually read my review I did criticize it, hell most of my review is me criticizing it, if had actually believed this was an Amazing story then I would’ve just gave a 5 but I didn’t

But I did criticize it just overall i have very few issues with the story personally, there user that give 5 stars without any reason as why it’s rated so high, hell I even criticized that some parts of the story the felt out of place like it shouldn’t even be there, it that not that deep, I had few problems with story I wrote a how felt about it that’s it