Hello. I like to write… even though I don’ t have the best schedule hehe
2021-02-06 Joined Canada
I’m not going to quit writing over someones opinion.
Finally someone who likes Cody 🥺
I don't know if I'm going to find them, since her death I have strayed away from my group. Of course, I'm still with them, I just barely talk to them anymore. Is it some sort of shock that I'm in?
Fantasy · Codonaine
Hehe thanjs
ch 0 1 Pilot (1) (SEASON 1 PREMIER)
Fantasy · Codonaine
Criticizing the story over reading just the synopsis and the first chapter does nto justify your distaste towards the story. None of the reviews are fake, they are all people who have read the story and gave their honest review. I am aware of grammar mistakes, but keep in mind my writing style is described like that so it doesn’t over complicate readers and makes it easier to read. I however do appreciate the honesty you put into this review and I am looking for improvements as every author needs it. My writing skills was horrible compared to now, so keep in mind that I am also trying. And the synopsis is a run through, the story starts 5 years into it. So I decided to describe it like that. The demis are an unexplainable concept in this world in which will further be discovered as the series continues. And I never put blame on Japan, read as it describes. In the story most people have no clue it began in Japan, Demis are being blamed by the Hunters in which will become frequent enemies in the future. I decided to stay with Cody and Aya (originally supposed to be Oliver and Kayla), I know Aya is short for another name but its the name I preferred for this character. I relate to Cody and Aya more than Oliver and Kayla, hence why I stuck with the character names. The world building isn’t as necessary due to the apocalypse but I do plan on improving in that specific area. ( And non the less why do you spill out an insult by calling me a weeb for naming a character Aya? That by no means makes me a weeb. That was unnecessary, insult to injury ow lmao. And I don’t use grammarly due to being broke and it won’t correct everything last time I used it. (I even used it for chapter 1 and you are writing one whole review for that specific one)
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Fantasy · Codonaine