JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

Buy one get one Just get the brother and he'll easily convince her

'...She is a bro-con'

The Author's POV

Fantasy · Entrail_JI

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

He would be the type to watch it on the living room tv with his roommates

"Woah, Woah," Gary then raised both his hands in surrender, "I'm not racist. I will have you know that I watch interracial por--"

Villain Retirement

Urban · Romeru

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

Don't kink shame...

'Oscar likes it in his ass?'

Quest Maker of Soul Land

Book&Literature · FanHarem

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

The thought of child support... is quite a worry

"Yep... I'm never getting 'up.'" Ja Sun looked down at his crotch.

Quest Maker of Soul Land

Book&Literature · FanHarem

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

Sentence weird, think "5 years ago, if someone" would be better

If 5 years ago, someone were to tell me I would take in a student, I would merely smile and look away.

A Degenerate's Tale

Fantasy · TentacleEthics

JaydenLiu

2yr

Replied to DiligentObserver

Giddy up horsey

Hu Tao became unusually quiet. Yomite used the forbidden word just to make her shut up for a bit.

Genshin Impact, Breezing Through Teyvat

Video Games · Stick_Swinger

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

Woman not wife... so...

[Remember that I can hear your thoughts, boy.] The demon said coldly. [Also, what can a virgin like you know? And why in the hell are you still a virgin? I slept with my first woman when I was like half your age.]

Hey, Why Are My Skills so Weird!?

Fantasy · Aidka

JaydenLiu

2yr

Posted

This is basically a self aware reincarnation. We have the Origin who has lived so many lives in order to stay sane(in human senses) he set rules for himself and just live the life to get the most fun. He's depressing, he's self aware, and best of all he's suicidal

How to Raise Your Regressor

Fantasy · Anit666

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

Ha like my pp was even visible in the first place. Jokes on you I win

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wevwjwvwjqwv

Fantasy · _oinkchan

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

IRL vs Online

Stop. Riley took in a long and deep breath as he tried to center his thoughts. He didn't truly realize how hard it was to be surrounded by people without his mask on. As Darkday, he could say and do anything he wanted, without any filter.

Villain Retirement

Urban · Romeru

JaydenLiu

2yr

Posted

The story starts off with a bang. You don't know what's going on and neither does he. In the first few(around 20) chapters it introduces a LOT of things. Past that point it settles where the mystery and world building shines a lot. There are plot twists and thrilling moments shining this novel. Although this is finished I read that the second one is going to come out

Lord of Mysteries

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

Well not his fault people don't want an awesome step-dad... or someone who can satisfy they loved ones better than they can

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wevwjwvwjqwv

Fantasy · _oinkchan

JaydenLiu

2yr

Posted

The story itself is interesting with the mc's backstory helping explain a lot of his thoughts. The grammar itself sucks. A lot of pronouns switched with things like siblings-brothers when only one of the two were male. As well as like he-she or she-he or masochist-sadist. The author often switches the word with the opposite one but if you can realize which ones are switched and fix it mentally you can read it

Fox in an inverted world

Eastern · DE_LEON

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

"Now... but right now" This just sounds weird

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Paradise of Infinity

Anime & Comics · FanHarem

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

Well I remember he practically raped Megumi(I think) the first time and somehow fixes the relationship

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Paradise of Infinity

Anime & Comics · FanHarem

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

Not even happy... just...sad :(

"Our mom isn't going to like this, and if she finds out it was you who came up with the idea... Well." Pepper couldn't finish the sentence, she just looked sad.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

JaydenLiu

2yr

Commented

Feel like more subconsciously considering he was trained to basically seduce and prostitute himself

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Paradise of Infinity

Anime & Comics · FanHarem

JaydenLiu

2yr

Posted

Translation quality went down around chp 40 so much at a point where names aren't consistent and pronouns are switched. The story itself is pretty interesting with characters having motives and stuff.