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The amount of misunderstanding and brainlessness in this story is appalling. She died and came back, but is still as reckless and stupid. When you think all is going well, it’s the ”I lost my current memory and remembered the memories from my past life where I have died but am still alive in another parallel universe”. At this point, I just want to finish the book and mark it as completed (about 100+ more chpts).

Short reverse harem setting. There is no male lead as she just wants to live her life after groundhog day for 500 years. The ending was super rushed. There seemed to be a direction at the beginning of the story, like I’ll fix the problem and come back for the ML, but as the story goes on, FL is just collecting boy toys that may or may not related to the ending of defeating a single woman. The pawns she collected for the finale wasn’t even used, and everything was concluded in essentially the final chapter. Nice starting, but the ending was just not good.

The grammar and language used in the story doesn’t compel one to continue reading. It feels kinda dragged out at parts and the resolution is not as satisfying as it was. Daughter, who is smart and witty, finds dad and somehow mum is just giving in whenever after they got together. The story feels inadequate and it’s a strain to complete (am at around the 1000 chpt now).

The beginning of the story was great, but it slowly started dragging out. FL started out strong and at the end, her strong characteristics got wash away. She still keeps her smarts at times but turns into a brainless FL that needs saving almost every time. The story has multiple families from multiple different cities and FL is part of multiple families throughout the story (mistakenly). Her lineage is complicated with multiple turns and ML is sweet and all but the whole plot just turns to mush at the end. It was a pleasant read (can be read chpt to chpt smoothly) but plot is just bad.

At around chpt 225, all the sick people in this story is just poisoned. Everyone wants a herb that no one knows how to use and are willing to spend an enormous amount to get. The story doesn’t flow and it jumps all over the place. ML is like a little puppy that follows the FL around and the FL is just apathetic about everything but her family. This story is just annoying to read. Read a couple of reviews saying that it’s a ripoff of another story. I’ll try to finish it since there’s only 520 chpts, but as of right now, not enjoying it at all.

Someone actually found the raw title. It’s in one of the recent reviews.

It started semi-decent, the FL was witty and the ML was sweet-ish. Then everything went downhill. ML became overbearing, FL turned brainless and they just keep hurting/seducing each other and there’s just so much angst. Oh, and the drugging/raping in the the stories, not just in the main one but the side characters. I’m just trying to complete it and hopefully get to a happy ending? But as of chapter 622, just bad in general.

It was entertaining, but the end felt too rush. The main leads are too OP and everything was suddenly resolved within the last 20 chpts.

The history of the story keeps changing throughout the book. ML doesn’t love FL in the past, then oh no, he actually loves her and did everything to protect her. FL was brought to kneel, but left because she had enough. Then somehow in the future when they talk about that event, she was kneeling for a day. Bringing up random instances and suddenly FL has some memory loss, and the ML can hypnotise FL because she trusted him.

It’s a sweet story, weak FL needed ML to save. Learns to be stronger and ends up with ML. Some twists and turn throughout the story. I don’t understand their family status though, makes no sense that one of them is in the older generation if both grandparents are friends. Grandpa Sheng > Papa/Mama Sheng > ML. Grandpa Shen > Papa Shen > FL. They should be in the same generation -.- Also, annoying that the last names, name and pronouns get mixed up. A LOT. I understand that Shen and Sheng is only a letter apart but still…

Seems promising from the start, genius FL transmigrated into a story she was reading and realize that she was the stupid lead that doesn’t have a good end. The thing that annoys me about the story is the timeline during events. They’d be having breakfast, then going to bed the next minute. Going to visit family over the weekend to visiting the next second. She was suppose to be a medical genius as described in the beginning, but doesn’t have the premise to show her worth, which make it kinda redundant.

It is not as engaging as when it started out. The FL started out strong and kinda independent but turns into a glutton that only hangs with her hubby. Which is fine if it transitions to a sweet afterstory after the revenge and ends there. But there are other plots that gets thrown in nilly willy to make the story longer and just so many ‘lips licking’ that it gets kinda annoying. As much as I like the story to flow, each chapter feels longer than it is. There are also still holes that are not covered from the beginning.

I liked the story, simple and without too much drama. However, it feels like there are a bunch of loose ends that just isn’t tied by the end of the story. The main couple had their fairytale ending, but the side characters are just left hanging.