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KimBarbie
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Nice book, author. I like the Mc so much and his way of thinking. overall, the book is interesting and anyone who reads will like it. just don't make the book too cliche and all that.
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would it not be good if there is a harem?
nice chapter
ch 14 Welcome Party
A Demon's Ascension To Immortality
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Author, will there be a harem?
I don't like things that would be a burden to the MC**
"Mother, Father!" Scarlett yelled from where she was standing at the window. She too had witnessed her both parents being killed and eaten by the monster. The monster soon noticed and rushed inside the house where she was standing, it grabbed her by the hair and pulled her outside after which he drove its claws right into her chest, pulling them out with a beating heart in its grasp.
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Thank You so much
A/N: Hey guys, sorry... I don't know how to write fighting scenes, XD but I'll improve with time. Thank You for supporting me
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XD
"David!" His wife yelled from where she was standing. She had seen everything, it happened so slowly as if time stopped moving that particular moment when her husband was being torn into pieces by the monster.
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huh... TF? I still did kill her, I don't things that would be a burden to Mc, lol
"Mother, Father!" Scarlett yelled from where she was standing at the window. She too had witnessed her both parents being killed and eaten by the monster. The monster soon noticed and rushed inside the house where she was standing, it grabbed her by the hair and pulled her outside after which he drove its claws right into her chest, pulling them out with a beating heart in its grasp.
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lol...Don't worry. XD
Once he arrived at the front of the house, he halted and caught the sight of one of the monsters feasting on the body of a little girl. His eyes trailed down to the clothes and when he saw the familiar blue gown, his body began to boil in anger.
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Oh! I get what you mean now.... I'll think about it, it's really great and sounds fun, heh
ch 0 1 New Family
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Fantasy 路 KimBarbie
Oh! I get what you mean now.... I'll think about it, it's really great and sounds fun, heh
ch 0 1 New Family
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thank you for the review 馃尮
that you shall get
ch 0 1 Better To Be Dead Than Alive
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Fantasy 路 KimBarbie
why do you copy someone else's stuff? this type of system, I've seen it in another book. does it mean that as an author, you can't come up with your own idea? is style of work? this is crazy, bro! I sincerely advice you to change your system and come up with a whole different idea, you need to create something you will be proud of.
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i like your idea but I'll need a more vivid explanation of it
ch 0 1 New Family
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I will, thank you for your comment
ch 0 1 Better To Be Dead Than Alive
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thanks for the chapter