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I truly hope you keep going dear writer. It is indeed a novel with great potential. I like how the hybrid natures of supernatural creatures could impact the storyline.

Very interesting novel to be honest, to be honest wasn't expecting this at the beginning but I've learned to love the main character and his skill. Kingdom building is not my fave type of novel but I'm really liking it so far.

Personally havent liked it so far(around ch 60), the over extension of harem to his mother makes the story a bit turbid, while the system is pretty cool, I hoped hed be hunting monsters to get skills as he did with the manticore. I do hope the story develops toward that point, but if its just harem then meh, The time skip transition wasnt very smooth. But the world building was very nice. Nonetheless, again, the use of 3 chps only for sexual intercourse, was very boring to read.

It's an interesting story, that's for sure, the possibilities for evolution should also be a major turn for the novel later on. Keep with the good work.

I can humbly say the story is very good so far for me. Almost ch 600 and am still looking forward to see how thw story will develop later on

I have to say, while it is greatly interesting that the author created such a complex world in just a few chapters, after integrating such a complex power as the 7 sins he definitely bit more than he will possibly be able to chew in my opinion. The story will become complex to understand and will not benefit the comfort of the reader.

Hope to see more chapters. I like the idea of a same universe as ultimate evolution and find this stories highly entretaining unfortunately I haven't seen constant updates.