BCqpLAN_CrOw - Profile

not my type of story too much drama the Gods arc should just have ended in the MHA world but noooooo due to some bullshit reason he lost all his levels just to have him reset for the next world. After that I don't think I can continue reading as from what I have seen Every time the author want's the MC to change to another world something bullshit will happen and something bad will happen to him.

5 star all the way i just hate that the ending was rushed.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I'm done with authors that think that only tragedies will make a great character development. I dont even care anymore about all those that have been killed throughout the first few chapters. They had no meaningful additions to the story that contributes in a good way that develops the mc's character development or even their own character development. Those side character are only there so that you the author have a reason to force the mc to become stronger. it such a shame though you had a good writing style. Though I'm wondering why most new authors don't understand that there are more ways to develop a character than them going through bad situation. I mean for example this fanfic the characters killed are only there to be killed and "develop" the mc. i mean what are you aiming for this fanfic, is it meant to be a power fantasy where he gets stronger than others? then why bother with useless side characters. if you meant for this to be a somewhat of a natural progression then why kill those useless characters than spending time to develop them more, make them more emotionally there and part of the overall story? i hope you improve, i love the way you write, and i hope you continue and be a great author in the future.

the first 15 chapters were good but I don't like where the story is going it seems like he will just recruit the strawhats and it just not for me i like one piece story in which the mc has a life not intertwined with cannon, yes they will interact but not so much that this kind of interaction is kind of ruin the story for me.

I take back what i said before and now that the rudeus focus centric part of the story is out of the way it kind of started getting good I hope in the future that while there will be other characters POV just please dont make it a multichapter where its just the POV of others as I cane here to know about the story of claude and while its kind of interesting to know what's happening around him and what others think of him, the novelty of it dwindles with more that 1 chapter at a time and starts to get annoying

dont get me wrong its good its just that I really was hoping for chakra to be excluded