Janet_Janett

1yr

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Priscilla seems to be a very lively personality. Life of the party!

"Well, you're at a ball, Evelina. You're allowed to have a bit of fun. And flirting with rich, random men on the dance floor will do you a world of good." She finished with a little giggle.

The Duke’s Stubborn Bride

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Janet_Janett

1yr

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No sympathy whatsoever

"Nonsense! The dress looks nothing but perfection to me. Just wait and see how many hearts you make flutter tonight. Thank you, Germaine. I always knew I could count on you."

The Duke’s Stubborn Bride

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Janet_Janett

1yr

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Wow! She's so passionate about her job!

"Très beau! It is finished." The active plum wept with passion after being on her knees at Evelina's side for so long.

The Duke’s Stubborn Bride

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Janet_Janett

1yr

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Is it just me, or is the Countess always angry? Although not for a pointless cause 😂

"For God's sake, Germaine! What is taking so long with her dress?" Breanna marched into the changing room, her temper bouncing off the walls before she'd even got her feet in the door. "We would be very late at this rate."

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Janet_Janett

1yr

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Why is she going to be in debt to you if she doesn't borrow the money from you?

"Well, if you are so afraid of being indebted to me, you should know by now that you will not walk out of here a freeloader either way. You already owe me enough. The only thing you need to worry about is when I find you to claim all my debts."

The Duke’s Stubborn Bride

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Janet_Janett

1yr

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Why does she have to be so brave? Goosebumps!!!!

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Janet_Janett

1yr

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Story’s getting good. This chapter was such a tlist. I did not expect that Evelina would smartly play on the driver’s intelligence. The good part is her decision to go back to that place... And also the scary part ha ha ha😅 I can feel the goosebumps already

ch 0 2 Abandoned and Penniless in a Strange Place

The Duke’s Stubborn Bride

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Janet_Janett

1yr

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Great read. Although the chapter got me a bit confused. I did not know whether to think of the stranger’s behavior as a case of abuse or view the scenario from the aspect of a romantic setting. Either way, Evelina brought it upon herself or visiting such a place😅😅 Excited about the next

ch 0 1 Unexpected Harassment in the Red Light District: A Lady Out of Place