It's annoying to read Willa speaking about herself in this manner..."Willa didn't mean to upset small sister ," " Willa wants help..."
This chapter was repeated 7 times!!! What criteria do you all use 🤔. This is the 2nd book today that was supposed to be completed 😕 but was a total mess!!! Another book that I want a refund from.
A very confused author. How else can you change Maya's sister's name to Lily mid-story and to make it worst, left her story in a cliffhanger and ended with a totally different story !!! I want a refund 😕
The plot is very intricate, yet not very easy to follow. The author keeps repeating the same phrases and sentences, even in the same chapter too many times. Now, the author has changed the surname of the ML and FL more thsn than once as well!
I'm sorry to say this, but this is the worst book I've read in all of my 50plus years!!!! There's no flowing of the story!!!
Too much obscene language!!!!
First of all your a great author to have someone like me hooked on HWY. I'm not a fantasy person I love mysteries, action, mafia, adventure and good old romance. But I just love how you are able to create such a fantastic book with so many different things happening at the same time and most importantly, the writing of ideas just flows into each other. So please don't sell yourself short. You're one of the few writers that I can actually see myself completely a book with almost 1000 chapters and not getting bored!!!
How can it be fair for the reader to have to pay a second time for the duplicated chapters!? Furthermore, due to this the story is not flowing smoothly and has become a task to read. It's now not a pleasure to read it. Therefore, I highly doubt that I'll recommend this book to anyone
it's not right to have to pay for so many duplicates
Why is Aria being referred to as Mr. Hayes, Colin as Mr. Vaughn and the housekeeper is Mrs. Hayes??? Confusing. .
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