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One thing I don't understand, the protagonist was still wearing the meteorite armor that basically burns on fire and when they are going to leave the restaurant Seshat literally sticks to the protagonist, completely ignoring that and passing it calmly, when before arriving at the restaurant the protagonist only agreed to go Because Seshat got burned trying to drag him, what happened? Someone please explain to me? xd

Personally, I really like the povs of other characters, at the end of the day, although knowing how the protagonist thinks is important, his opinion is not absolute and we cannot know about things like rumors, relationships and the way others perceive him. I feel that putting one or another POV in situations where many things happen in one place is important, so we get a more general view of the panorama, but we should not abuse it, unless you want to highlight a special character, otherwise , be free to do so.

I don't know how I got here, but I liked it. The only thing missing is romantic development with Aria and we have it all

It confused me a bit, that last part where he says that if it can't be his and so, the protagonist or Ruby says so.

Thanks For chapter

typical, the strongest always has a system XD but on the other hand, this is where the main character fixes the loose ends, also because of the description of the lake, wouldn't he then kill almost everyone? Since it kills everything with impure intentions, only a saint would survive in that lake, maybe I'm confused but I hope not.

I see that you did not do well in the roulette of life xd

As always, the author does not disappoint, and how double-sided Lumine XD is, the good thing is that either humiliation or aristocratic fight is coming (with elegant insults)

Don't despair author, if you study for 100 years you could get an A, even if it's in the blood test XD

when you realize that adonis knows everything and is about to create the best plotwist ever

I miss not seeing comments, I'm more curious about the scale of power that the MC's class hints at, basically he's telling him to make an army of all the monsters before asking the strong ones XD

what to do when you're screwed drag with you who you hate :)

typical, exploit the editor XD

I'll be honest, the fight scene was short and very lacking in detail, 2 things affected it in my opinion 1- The terrain was not described, since I did not know in a specific way where the MC was, I could not clearly imagine where he was moving, how many wolves there could be around him or even the speed at which they were attacking him or him. 2-I think someone already said it, but details were missing, I'm not going to get into that part much since it's already difficult to write a fight to detail it adequately. What I do congratulate is how tension was generated in the fight, I think you did very well.

Except for the notes with an [A/N:...] which are comments by the author, the others were from the system, right? like the Extra Supremacy, I thought the system said it since basically its idea is to create the best extra of all XD

This chapter only emphasized the fact that when they leave the tower there will be a problem of enormous proportions XD Although seeing it well, it is a bit strange, right? Eth's soul was given to Nathan (our protagonist, the one whose last name is Marcus I think) so that he wouldn't die, because the abomination stole his soul, but due to the "Miracle" or some other strange thing, Eth survived, he merged with abomination and assimilated Nathan's soul, which confuses me a lot, since the 2 parts of abomination had Nathan's soul, the one that he took from him when he destroyed the 14th floor and the one that Eth used to come back to life, the soul Was it divided into 2 or had the abomination stolen the 2 souls? It's very strange, the only thing I'm sure of is that those two are going to fight, because the other one wanted to kill himself for the other xd or maybe Nathan wants to kill himself for doing nothing xd confused everything.

every day further away from seeing eth again, waiting for Nathan's mental collapse, to cry with him.

This chapter was amazing, and I'm going to assume that Nathan is wearing a suit right now, since imagining him with torn clothes does not suit him so well? In any case, I wonder how the relationship of León and Nathan will evolve after this, it will be very interesting to see XD Oh, Thanks For The chapter