HA i love this
Suddenly her face cleared, "I, of course, wouldn't go against my father. I would never tell you that there was a wood cottage outside the village of Beloran, five days southwest of here. I will not tell you that it's by a creek. I would not tell you that it is uninhabited, to my knowledge. I am a good and loyal daughter. Now, get out!"
Fantasy · SandiBell
this is utterly fascinating to me
I flinched as I knew in my heart he was Speaking of our party. This was the second time I'd had one of these visions. The first one hadn't made sense to me until just recently. I had it just prior to Lord Alecai and Lady Vivian arriving in Viceria.
Fantasy · SandiBell
awwwwwe
After a few moments, Pharon said, "I get it. You know, how you don't like it when he tries to protect you. It's like he doesn't respect how capable you are." I looked over at Pharon in surprise. His cheeks flushed a bit. "I really admire how capable you are; it's one of the things I like most about you." I blinked. I hadn't realized that Pharon liked anything about me.
Fantasy · SandiBell
man i can picture this scene so clearly. It kinda has a LOTR vibe
"No." The Archivist said firmly. "We will go around to the North and cut under the mountains through the ruins." His voice was steely as he said this, silencing all discussion. I blinked and looked at Kane who was standing beside me. His face was dark. When he caught me looking at him, he quickly hid his expression and smiled.
Fantasy · SandiBell
Just wondering, what happened with Thomas?
Twelve days ago, we had, by majority vote, decided to travel to Volantis. Lord Glade and Lady Brook wanted to return home and Prince Pharon and the Archivist wanted to seek the High Lord's aid in reclaiming Pharon's throne.
Fantasy · SandiBell
hes such a guy, i love it
Kane flushed and glanced at me, "I can make a better one. It was just for me, so I didn't really care." he explained.
Fantasy · SandiBell
KANE
His name fell from my lips like a prayer, "Kane."
Fantasy · SandiBell
i definitely dont like him any more
"You godsdamned bitch!" He muttered under his breath. Then he slowly drew his hands down his face and looked at me, "If you ever try to kill yourself again, I will hunt down everyone you ever cared about and erase them from this world, but not before torturing them for as long as I can keep them alive." A shiver ran down my spine as the look on Lord Alecai's face told me that this was a promise not a threat.
Fantasy · SandiBell
yes I'm sad this is ending :( its a very captivating story
ch 67 July 2nd - The Midsummer Ball
Fantasy · SandiBell
i absolutely love her style of describing these things XD also you shift scenes so smoothly and I think its a good balance of heavy things and lighter toned things
Finally, I was wiped down with some sort of sparkly white lotion, and then forced to sit in a chair for three hours as my hair was washed, cut, pulled, curled, and twisted into some unnatural arrangement of coils. As this was going on, another female was applying make up to my face. She had to keep reminding me to stay still, since my face was naturally falling into a grimace every thirty seconds.
Fantasy · SandiBell
i dont know how to put it into words but this battle that you're putting her through hits. you've got wonderful quality of expression. its beyond what I can properly put into words
I shuddered at the thought and hated myself for the tremor of excitement that joined in with my fear.
Fantasy · SandiBell
i wouldnt say bad person, id say it means you appreciate justice ;) (yes its satisfying)
ch 64 June 23rd - Evening - You are an Insect
Fantasy · SandiBell
this is fascinating to me
Pharon blinked rapidly, "To spare her life."
Fantasy · SandiBell
aww he seems to really care! maybe ill be proven wrong but I find it kinda sweet, given that I didn't expect him to care
As I passed along the line but participants waiting to enter the shop, a male laughed aloud, "no wonder it took them so long. Lord Alecai was trying to find something that looks good on a cow!" I felt Lord Alecai stiffen beside me.
Fantasy · SandiBell
oof XD
I snorted in derision, "He didn't have to. You two aren't being very discreet."
Fantasy · SandiBell
Oh no I completely agree. Tears are not equal to weakness. being able to care and keep going takes strength
ch 61 June 23rd - Getting Stronger
Fantasy · SandiBell
oh man this stings
When I finally reached the tree, I placed my hand on the ruined bark. Instantly, agony ripped through me. I felt like I was being flayed alive with a burning sword. I screamed as tears rolled down my cheeks. The pain began to lesson, and I realized it was coming to me through my hand. The pain belonged to the pine. As the pain lessoned, I felt the energy of the pine slipping away.
Fantasy · SandiBell
oOf
"Why would I kill myself?" I shouted at him, "I'll kill you, you Gods-cursed Moron!"
Fantasy · SandiBell
BAHAHAA
As I heard the waterfall of words tumbling from the male's mouth, I finally recognized him, "Puppy male?" I asked cutting him off. The male's handsome face betrayed confusion.
Falling in Love While Earnestly Trying to Get Disowned
Fantasy · SandiBell