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Sayuri_KB

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How will they travel through the multiverse and aren’t they like only 5 year old.

-- In the [Eri & Himiko's Adventure in the Multiverse] arc, the sisters will be exploring the parallel universes that Shido saw glimpses of during his fight with Genesis. The arc will be continuous and spread between the chapters of the regular plot. To explain it better, while Shido and others are busy with their stuff, Himiko and Eri will be going on their own adventures.

MHA: 'Serene' Life in Another World

MHA: 'Serene' Life in Another World

Anime & Comics · Gonshido

Sayuri_KB
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What are they talking about?

"No," Kakashi shook his head, "Not possible. He would have said something if that were the case. I suggest that not be brought up again." the silver haired Jonin's voice sharpened at the end.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf

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So Ashina had another life’s memories like Naruto?

Ashina didn't know how he had memories from another life. A life not his own, but a life nonetheless.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf

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Didn’t you write in the first chapter that he had close friends

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Who gave them these tags?

"Two are for Hashirama and Tobirama," A voice he did not expect to hear again had said in his very house, having broken in and evaded all the security seals and ANBU, "And the other is specifically for Ashina."

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf

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???

She thought she heard an echo of a voice, almost sounding like a hiss and a light burning feeling creeping up her neck.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf

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I’m sure you can make it work, you just have to make it so there’s some problems between Hinata an Ino, to make it more realistic because no woman would want to share their man, and then you make a situation where Hinata and Ino make up and accept to share Naruto

One final thing: I think I will try to make the pairing Naru/Ino/Hina.(The jokes Jiraiya and Kakashi make will be hilarious). If I can pull it off, I'll go through with it. If not, I can walk it back into just a friendship with one. It'll depend on whether I can get Hinata and Ino to be friends that will share, or they like each other as well. Should I or or should I not? The story will shift down another path if I do it and I'm being an indecisive little bitch about it. If you have a certain opinion on it, please explain your stance. I would appreciate the input more than anything, especially with something this important to the plot.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf

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So he killed someone before, was it in the hyuga thing or in his past life.

'For your own good. You'd killed someone accidentally, take a week or two off. It'll help,' they said.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf

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Sayuri_KB
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You could just edit the first few chapters so instead of the mc reincarnating in yahiko body, he was always yahiko and after the attack, he got back the memories of his past life

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So hes 4 years old and can already use a computer?

"Izuku," Toshinori started. "I'm sorry, you don't have to be a hero, you know. It's a very dangerous job." Toshinori continued as he took Izumi off his lap and brought Izuku into a hug. Izuku didn't refuse it as tears started to well in his eyes again. Izumi sat on the couch and watched the news of a new hero debuting. After a while, Izuku went back to his room, closed the door and locked it. He got on his computer and searched many things on the internet. 'Can you be a quirkless hero?' 'How to get a quirk when you're quirkless?' 'How many children in Japan are quirkless?' 'Is it ok to be quirkless?'

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Anime & Comics · Delusion10

Sayuri_KB
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How old is he?

"I have done a lot to Hachiman's appearance, it barely resembles him anymore. Still, it is a good change." He inspects every corner of his attractive face.

My Reincarnation Is As Abnormal As I Expected

My Reincarnation Is As Abnormal As I Expected

Anime & Comics · Frona_Gorgophone

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The rewrite is definitely better but personally, it would be cool if you could if you could reveal soon the backstory of the MC and the backstory of the body he is in(preferably in the next chapter).

Hallo! Welcome to the first actual chapter of the SOT revamp! I honestly took way too much doing this chapter, but I was kinda paranoid regarding its quality and pacing. Speaking of which, please provide me with your thoughts and criticisms about this chapter. It felt kinda wrong to me writing this chapter, so I just want to know if my concerns are right or I'm just straight-up paranoid. The next chapter probably gonna come 2-3 days from now, so don't expect it tomorrow. Have a good day and thanks for reading!

Swordsman of Teyvat (STORY REVAMPED)

Swordsman of Teyvat (STORY REVAMPED)

Video Games · SpeedwagonDrip

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