GreenRaven - Profile

Same old, same old story is the exact same to the cannon from what i read up to 150 chapters. Uchiha massacre still happens and mc somehow doesn't care, even though their teammate was an Uchiha. It gets boring and repetitive after 100 chapters. I thought this story was going to be a good one for the first 100 chapters but sadly its just fallowing Canon. The reason im giving it 1/5 stars is because I hate fanfictions that can't make their own plot and instead makes it a copy of canon. I don't read fanfictions to be reminded of the stupid and plot points of canon. that and it makes no sense for mc to not do anything during the massacre. He was literally a borderline couple with an uchiha. Not to mention it takes around 100 chapters for him to make it to chunin even though the story never deviated from training, missions and combat. In the whole of 100 chapters there was no filler. dropped.

this is actually of great quality. I hope this is continued for a long time.

it's good. writing quality is of decent status and this story has a good plot to it. I love the way you did the underdog trope with the main character. it's very unique. how he gets stronger is more realistic than other stories and is satisfying.

I love the skill at which the story is written and I also like the premise of the story. the one problem I have is the fact that the mc isn't getting attached to people like a human would. he's just letting things happen as if he wasn't there. Not only did he let the world stay on track; but, he also made sure to manipulate the situations to make sure the atrocities happen. that is not how a person is unless the guy is a sociopath.

this is just an update to my review that I made when he was just at chapter 12. I still like the idea of this. it's a great idea. I love the direction that you took this. the mindset of the MC is definitely Uchiha. definitely brings into perspective what would happen if chakra was in RWBY. it's really interesting and keep up the good work.

I think that this story is a good one. I like the idea of there being Halo stories similar to this. it's a shame that I haven't seen more like this and for that you'd be getting a good rating just upon having the story The Way it is. one problem that I have specifically is the shortness of the chapters. if you can make the chapters longer you'll be getting a better rating from me.

I love the idea of this! It's a great thing. A huge problem is that the mc is overly over powered and this makes similar stories boring. another thing is that you may be going to fast with the pacing.

I like the idea of clans being in the world of remnant. you should add more clans and add politics surrounding the clans' relationship with the kingdoms.