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this chapter is too weird. now specific talent for just one skill is very oddly convenient for mc to just pick up and another thing is did he not notice someone with good talent for so long here, it's like this guy just appeared in time of need as the plot needed to be moved forward. i also feel author making mc stupid so he wouldn't progress too fast like not using he cheat to the fullest, as he has an chance to copy talent once a day but it doesn't accumulate so he should obvious just cheat once as it won't be wasted it doesn't necessarily have to be martial arts talent it could be any talent as long as the chance is not wasted.
ch 14 Chapter 14: Limit Breaker part 1
The Human Giant
Fantasy · Mr_Palados
so basically primordial chaos .
Cultivating in celestial energy host will have the ability to harness the power of celestial energy to cultivate and enhance your skills, not just those related to space. This is because celestial energy is the source of all other energies, and as a result, you can use it to practice different element skills as well. It is important to note that celestial energy is not just limited to the space element but is in fact, the foundation for all elements. As a cultivator, understanding and harnessing the power of celestial energy is crucial in order to achieve greater levels of strength and mastery over your skills.]
Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
i feel like the story is going to face slapping detection. i like the mc better when he was low key, not because I don't like high profile MC but there are no explanations and things just become convenient so the mc could mc could show off. since when did he learn to control his qi this masterfully or for when can he control his qi outside of his body . why can fight above his realm with an sword technique which has no explanation if can't even explain the sword technique at basic level or how does an level second qi refinement have enough qi to damage an foundation building. if he level 9 qi refinement then it would have at least believable.
ch 39 Han Cai Enters The Arena
Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
i feel like sword skill could have been more explained because it feels unreal to fight a major realm above you. it would have much more fitting if he gained something like sword intent at level 3 which explains jumping realms . another explanation could that foundation building aren't just that strong to begin with.
ch 24 Zhou Faction
Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
it makes sense to be low key but I hope he will be more smart low key like if some people stand in line, the people at the forefront are the most handsome and talented behind them are talented behind them are handsome and mediocre and so on till end of line are ugly and untalented. who do you think will get most attention obviously one at the front and and end. my point being be middle of line. you can be wolf in sheeps clothing but it has more disadvantage than advantages as sheep will get targeted often it is just better to be in wolf pack than sheeps herd while not being the most eye catching lion and end up in an zoo.
Except his cultivation and charm there was growth in all of his stats. He intentionally did not increase cultivation or charm. The less he was noticed by the people the more peaceful his life will be.
Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
doesn't that require him to master the skill also those who know the skill should be able to tell. another thing is that it is a physical skill which means it is easy to reveal before muscle memory. just my speculation as there could be other reasons like the system giving him full mastery over skill??
But there was no tool in outer sect hall that could measure his skills . They will see his sword skill at the level he would like to show them.
Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
this chapter was short but quality was good.
ch 0 4 Medallion
Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
The novel is quite good so far. only nitpick i can think of is the info dumps too obvious, info dumps are not bad but rather than having them repeatedly in few paragraphs why not integrate in different part. also they very eye catching because author repeat some word like city or poor people form last episode.
ch 0 3 Cloud Mountain City
Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
he repeatedly said he doesn't want to be a hero but proceeds to tail the suspect for no f c k i ng reason whatsoever other than my guy want to be Batman/superhero. it's feel even more stupid when he say I want keep an low profile but then starts hunting criminal for no reason.
ch 27 Chapter 27 Monitoring
What It's Like Being a Vampire
Urban · Miraculous Hamburger
I'm a bit confused here, so does he have to manually explode the fireball every time or it would automatically explode on contact and the advanced method is controlling the fireball's path and time of the explosion.
Not discouraged, Ed continued to practice the spell a couple more times. It took him no more than an hour to master the basic casting and firing of the spell at which point he could confidently declare he had learned the spell. While he couldn't detonate the fireball spell at will he couldn't really complain. Vorgarag had already explained that the process would require precise calculations which he was obviously incapable of doing at his level.
Stuck as a Dungeon Mob
Fantasy · Pwnzer
this remindes me of Skyrim
'A shaman is bound to have some books in their room, right?' Thus thinking so, Ed scavenged through the shaman's room without a tinge of guilt. The crypt helped him develop such an intrusive personality, there was not even a tread of hesitation as he scoured the room.
Stuck as a Dungeon Mob
Fantasy · Pwnzer
let make a guess here, the love interests grade would be probably A or B right so her she would be too unreachable for so he would work very hard with his heaven defying will to reach greater Hights even with his inferior talent, also to spice things up he probably has an hidden bloodline which extra OP which would be shown in later parts of the story.
[Ability grade: D]
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy · Awespec
so main problem with girl is that, she just plain boring to read about because of the fact she literally has no character(for now). also give her peerless beauty and talent has zero value to readers(to me atleast) as It appears more like MC chasing and cardboard figure rather than real and top of that she pretty generic and cliched character having nothing unique to her. all in all I nothing against mc chasing an girl like but so many factors combined together make romance worst part of the story so far.
ch 0 8 Awaken
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy · Awespec
i feel like mc should have good money making ability by having so many talents.
ch 19 Chapter 19: A Year to Remember
The Human Giant
Fantasy · Mr_Palados