I've read the story, and I have to say: It can do better. Lot's of words that could have fit the story perfectly went underused or neglected. And the scenes, while tense don't make your blood boil. I feel like this author has a lot of potential, but right now, they needs a thesaurus and some elbow grease...
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I've read the story, and I have to say: It can do better. Lot's of words that could have fit the story perfectly went underused or neglected. And the scenes, while tense don't make your blood boil. I feel like this author has a lot of potential, but right now, they needs a thesaurus and some elbow grease...
The World of The Devil isn't Hell, It's Business
Urban · Ajax_was_here