Rayeen_Noledo - Profile

I like the way the author write the story as well as the plot of the story. I am not a fan of this genre but I definitely recommend it to my fellow reader.

I really like how the author write story and the way she described it is awesome.. However be careful to the whole plot as you have to justify why the heroin is talking to her alter ego because it is quite unusual for a person or even a friend of the heroin to know that. The readers might feel uncomfortable and judge the character of the heroin.. So far I know that the author have a real talent and a gem.. So please keep shining...

The plot of the story is a unique one for me and how the story develop really intrigued me... I like how the author write the story not too slow and not too fast just right. Keep it up....

Wow I wish I could write the way you do... Hehehe.. I like the story.. It simple yet it does have the flexibility of situation that any person can relate to... I love it.. Keep it up ....

I love the story itself because it is really a challenge to make a fantasy story.. Fantasy stories is a thumbs up for me... And I like how the author write the story.. It is lively and definitely good at what he/she is doing.. Keep it up...

The plot of the story might have the same plot as others... But the way the author wrote it is enchanting.. I can't wait to see how the author honed it to make it his/her own story . Keep up the good work....

I have read stories with this plot but I really am excited as to how the author will own this story.. I like how the author write and I can see that it is a pure talent.. So keep up the good work..

This is the story I can relate with.. I really like the plot of the stories because it's all about family and relationship towards other person.. It really intrigued me .. Good job...

I love the story and I am a fan of fantasy genres.. I like how the author wrote the story... I am looking forward for the author first book.....

I like the plot of the story because I am open to fantasy genres... But the synopsis is a little bit off because everyone has an up's and down situation coz that's what life is.. The exciting and challenging thing is how you will justify the situation in their up and down moment.. That's what I will be looking to.. Good luck...

I like the plot of the story and I like how the author write it.. I don't wanna be biased but I love "love stories" and this definitely catch my attention... Keep it up...

I am not a fan of horror but I like how it was written, definitely not a pro but it has potential to grow.. The story itself have a potential so keep it up....

Wow.. I love fantasy as much as I love, love stories.. And this one is a go for me.. I like the story and how it is written.. This book has potential So keep it up...

The plot of the story is very captivating and I really like how the author write it. The author really knows what he/she's doing.. Keep up the good work...

Wow... I am not into fantasies story but this pulled in... I like how the author write the story. It is very natural.. Definitely a story to share.. Keep it up..

The story struck me.. This is close to reality. The choice of words are nicely written as well as the characters.. I'm sure that the author will justified both culture difference and the reality of the situation... Keep it up author...

I like the plot of the story and the way you right in some part is awesome and I can see a real talent.. I am not a good writers myself but... There are loopholes in the plot.. Like in reality a baby doesn't have any recollection about the very specific thing that happens in their life, specially when they are new born.. It might be safe if it is a POV of the Parent.. Second Language and dictionary is a real challenge for a three year old child what more for analization of the situation.. A baby may feel hostile towards violence and it can be traumatic for a child but somehow it will be a mistery for them of what the situation is all about.. All in all.. It is a good story and has potential.. Keep it up..

I guess you nailed it.. The plot of the story is not everybody can relate to but it will give a lesson and a twister feeling from the heart.. I love how special her character is and I can't wait to know what she can do to change everyone's world... Keep it up..

It's a wow for me.. The writing quality is good, the author wake my sleeping imagination. I love how they present their culture Keep up the good work...

I like how close the story into reality and I like how the author write.. It's just that I am a little bit concerned about the racisms part because going back in history I know for once that not only nigerian have gone through racisms. I can understand that your people gone through a lot than others but I can't help to say that every people in this world experienced discrimination both in ordinary life and now that covid-19 exist. But it's amazing to know that other people still choose to not hurt one another and make it in a more democratic way.. And Nigerian today is experiencing a better life than the past I really think that it's something to be thankful. And in this present day being black skin, people talk it out for days but having a bad attitude toward it will remain in someone's mind..