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I already like Alpha 1, this story is great.
"In that case, sir, it's best that we split up our forces when we enter a new floor. There are three corridors. Alpha 1 to 3, including you sir, will be in group 1. Alpha 4 to 7 will be in group 2, and Alpha 8 to 10 will be in group 3."
Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
Sci-fi · Faux1231
I think the best way to implement all the laws is to improve the Economy and production which in turn can increase the profits and income everyone will get. Once everyone's profit increases then they will automatically suffice some less restrictive laws. This will improve the image of Duke and present a benevolent side of his in front of everyone. One's he have sufficient money he can train a proper army and with enough force, culture, economy and production he can practically do anything.
ch 34 First Laws (Part 1)
Transmigrated into Patriarchal Kingdom: Won’t Abandon my Values!
Fantasy · Andrew_3058
I really like the world building and setting, one suggestion would be for you to do a long term planning of future plots and summarize the general flow of the story. It doesn't have to be very exciting but it will help you keep track of the storyline.
ch 40 Knight Households
Legacy of Eldric: A Tale of Ruler
Fantasy · Warrior_Blade
The world is an expansive realm, brimming with countless wonders and mysteries. In one of its small but enchanting continents, known as Valeria, a tapestry of kingdoms unfolds. Amidst the vast expanse of this land, where tales of valor and treachery intertwine, there exists an empire that surpasses its counterparts - the Moonlight Empire.
Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms
Fantasy · Warrior_Blade
One of the best introductions I had ever seen on Webnovel
The world is an expansive realm, brimming with countless wonders and mysteries. In one of its small but enchanting continents, known as Valeria, a tapestry of kingdoms unfolds. Amidst the vast expanse of this land, where tales of valor and treachery intertwine, there exists an empire that surpasses its counterparts - the Moonlight Empire.
Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms
Fantasy · Warrior_Blade
This chapter is actually very stupid, you can not show high IQ of MC by degrading IQ of other people.
ch 84 Dumont Dukedom’s Army Arrives
Remote Village to Strongest Nation
Fantasy · Meowder
An important suggestion that you should know about is that touching diplomatic envoys should be taboo for any leader who is willing to develop for a long term and it spoils the reputation and deal a devastating blow to future diplomatic relations in every possible way.
"Shut the fuck up, after marching here for months with a large army like that, you're going to talk peace? Do you think the people here are idiots? Go back to your commander and tell them that Resonance City will never surrender to the likes of you!"
Remote Village to Strongest Nation
Fantasy · Meowder
Its a great development so far and this spar was a great idea.
ch 82 Blanc vs Alexander (2)
Remote Village to Strongest Nation
Fantasy · Meowder
You should read some real political interactions and try to guide the talk to the final goal of the meeting in more subtle and realistic way using sentences of multiple meanings to always leave a way out. This will really help you in polishing the story.
ch 74 Envoy from Terravalle Kingdom
Remote Village to Strongest Nation
Fantasy · Meowder
"Great answer! From now on, you shall be known as Mittens"
Remote Village to Strongest Nation
Fantasy · Meowder
"I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for ransom, I can tell you I don't have money. But what I do have are a very particular set of skills, skills I have acquired over a very long career, skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you let my sister go now, that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you. I will not pursue you. But if you don't, I will look for you, I will find you, and I will kill you."
Niel's gaze lingered on Angela, Denise, and Lisa, planning something malicious—then was interrupted when one of his friends gathered the attention of everyone.
Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
Sci-fi · Faux1231