Badges 5
Moments 40
to the edge
"Good." William pulled the guard up from the floor and pushed him at the edge of the docks. He pushed the guard towards the water.
The Forgotten Princess
History · Les01
Why shouldn’t the errors be pointed out? Do you want the readers to constantly fight with trying to figure out what is really being written and conveyed or would you prefer a smooth written piece that readers can enjoy much more? If you feel I’m being too critical, then it should be corrected prior to being posted. Have a blessed day!
"The war between Grandcrest and Jennovia came into a halt when the civil war broke in their side." Regaleon said. "We are experiencing a momentarily cease fire, which is one of the things Duke Matias and I agreed upon."
The Forgotten Princess
History · Les01
pulled
Finally, I let him drag me to the couch, taking my jacket and my purse and then walking awkwardly while being pulling behind him. Once we get outside I'm really standing my ground. But he diminished my plan when he didn't turn towards the exit, instead leading me the other way to the doors that said Employees only, and to my surprise, nobody stopped him. Did he actually work here?
Only Mine
Urban · Teyci88
leaving her here
He gave her a calm look that he obviously didn't feel and reply, "She had too much to drink and I'm not letting her here with some random guy pushing his tongue down her throat."
Only Mine
Urban · Teyci88
smile I had
We all went back to the dance floor and decided to dance our night away. Hanna kept on checking me for any sign of distress, but I gave her the best smile I've had and promised to talk about it tomorrow. She knew something was happening, but I didn't have the time to tell her what happened with us the last time we were together, or rather I didn't want to discuss him in hope of forgetting all about it. I knew I wouldn't be able to avoid it anymore from today on. She obviously saw us kissing.
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Urban · Teyci88
talking about it
So I went back to my friends and decided to just forget about the whole incident. When I saw all their eyes on me I knew they saw what happened, but I avoided talking about completely. Hanna gave me a worried look when seeing my obvious distress, but I shrugged it off, declaring I need more shots.
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Urban · Teyci88
going from bad
In an instant moment of pure stupidity and adrenaline, I turned in the direction of him and the woman when she unexpectedly opened her arms in an animated discussion, bumping me in the process. The content of my drinks spilled all over the back of her pink dress and the impact of my collision made her spill her drink on the sleeve of Jake's black shirt. Oh my god! This is just getting from bad to worse.
Only Mine
Urban · Teyci88
could see each
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The Forgotten Princess
History · Les01
seating
It's Friday night and I'm heading over to Becca and Brian's place to put together the sitting arrangements, but mostly just to have a chill-out evening.
Only Mine
Urban · Teyci88
Why does this
"I hope he doesn't tell everyone about my epic clumsiness and how much I was blushing. This is so embarrassing. Why this always happen to me?"
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Urban · Teyci88
inching
I’m irritated but feel the corners of my mouth itching upwards to join her at the irony of the situation.
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Urban · Teyci88
mesmerized with
"Is this the freaking guy from the other day? The one you were so mesmerized of and talking about him for twenty minutes straight while driving here?" I don't have time to reply before she continues with her rambling.
Only Mine
Urban · Teyci88
at that time conveniently
I hear my iPhone ringing in the other room, letting me know that Hanna is downstairs waiting for me. I take one last look at myself before heading out. The flirty black dress hits me mid-thighs and hugs my curves in all the right places. It's an open-back dress showing off my toned back that is a result of hard work in the gym and it's one part of my body that I'm extremely proud of. I am not super self-confident, but in general, I'm pretty satisfied with the way I look. I have quite long legs, curvy hips, perky ass, and a small waist. My boobs are nice, but nothing big to brag about and somehow it works with my whole appearance. I have light brown wavy hair that is reaching almost to the mid of my back and an interesting combination of greyish-green eyes with a touch of brown. I don't have a supermodel look, at that conveniently the image of Jake's cocky blond girlfriend crosses my mind, but I do get enough attention from the opposite sex to keep my ego satisfied.
Only Mine
Urban · Teyci88
not go broke
I turn in the direction of the high couture outlet store I love, hoping I will be at least lucky with finding a dress presentable enough in such a short time. And not get broke in the process.
Only Mine
Urban · Teyci88
puts off
I wish at least for once I wouldn't be a person that puts all her obligations to the last possible minute.
Only Mine
Urban · Teyci88
I don't think you meant that her eyes were rosy pink...maybe her cheeks?
Off The Clock
Urban · Bitter_Chocolate15