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so the author began mixing names now sigh such a waste..

is that a god of war in action its so lame i think..

so the group of puppets that looked for his mother suddenly become dumbed like the author or such a waste of story.. hahaha it began in a very I threshing nice story to end in a very disappointing ending or some kind hahaha imagine the group puppets can find his mom, but suddenly there she is inside his future mother in law's company hahaha

so the author is taking a short cut now in this story.. such a waste of great story.. I think the author can't come up with a great chapter but taking the shortcuts it should be a volume for this will even make the story more interesting..I guess the author can't produce a good story know.

oh such a waste in this story.. the author can't think of anything just keep on saying everything in repeating process.. there's no action and both antagonist and protagonist became absolute coward there's no action at all as if they don't have strength to back it up.. such a waste, really is this all that can you think of AUTHOR?

what waste of good story.. I think this will not end.. the author is starting to write the story lesser in each chapter.. he or she just filled more words with the Mc stat in each chapters ending sigh..

Oh what happen to this story now.. I think this will not end.. Such a waste of good story.. The author can't seem to keep it up

Wow this is too much to take in, lots of stages in the realm.. Hahaha hopefully this story will meet it's end.. I can't imagine how many chapters it will make hahaha

Good story..but I think it's still have a poor writing on it..

Where is the near death experience? It's not even in the chapter.. Tsk tsk

What is the bet in their duel?

Meaningless chapter

I think he should try the mana steal on those 3 bullies

The author didn't even corrected the little guy of about 2 to 3 meters tall or maybe it's not only 3 yrs later but 10 to 12 yrs later..hahaha I think it's the conversion mistake of the author

Wrong grammar. Lousy sentence

Oh I think mc is a semi gay haha and obviously blind stupid like the one he ask for a bldg that's a 20 story high hahaha

I hate stories that are using disguise.. It's so lame

This is one of the most slowest moving story that I have read so far.. Tsk tsk

He will get the forbidden spear art and used it

Oh why did he kill he's summoned? He's just a summoned only..