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See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon
ch 1101 Don't Do Something Stupid
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
Could* accept this news
"What about the Celestial Demon Cult?" asked Golden Fist, trying to control himself. He was a calm individual by nature and understood the brilliant strategic move of that lie, so he could not accept this news.
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
Now* be in our control
"Second punishment: for the next 50 generations, all the Divine Positions in the Lower Realm will be under the jurisdiction of the Myriad Emperor World's court. You will still control the court in your homeworld, but the Lower Realm will not be in our control."
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon
ch 1084 The Treasury
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 1082 Wrapping Up
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
Who is sera again? Author, can you make a character glossary since it’s easy to forget who they are
'If only this spell was a little better, I would have already used it on Sera and clarified my suspicions by now.'
Conquering The Game's World
Fantasy · Dakshay
When others are not in the presence of a king/emperorsovereign, it should be “Glory to His majesty”. Your Majesty” is when the leader is directly being addressed.
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Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
Once you read the story, you realize the hype is justified.
Now, the Eye of Heavenly Dao notices a soul that managed to bypass its defense, and said soul has the potential to completely alter the fate and fundamental order of this world.
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
Bro there are way too many flowery words. This paragraph is fine but the last few chapters have been straight out of chat gpt. It's annoying.
While there were other branches that existed, these families stood as the primary force within the Ravenstein lineage. Through their united endeavors, the Ravensteins upheld their esteemed legacy, a force of unparalleled influence and revered strength.
Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
I’ll be honest, the writing still is a bit too fluffy and overly complicated. It appears as if you’re using chat gpt or something of the sort. Your original writing style, while still having grammar mistakes, was still better since now it seems like you’re writing some sort of over the top theatrical production instead of a novel.
ch 1344 The Absurd and The Logical.
Supremacy Games
Sci-fi · MidGard
That was sensation, not serenity. If you’re gonna judge, at least get the details right
Felix soon focused on trying to get to the ground as fast as possible unbeknownst that Saltz Master was the one who ambushed Serenity inside the thunderstorm, killing her instantly!
Supremacy Games
Sci-fi · MidGard
See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car
ch 913 Looking Outside
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
Grammar Improvement: Instead of "Despite the outside world being dangerous, ..." (passive tense), change it to active voice -- "Nonetheless, despite the dangers of the outside world, ..."
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Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
Translator, Can you please stop using our hero every time? It breaks the immersion and is annoying. I’ve read the raws and I know the author didn’ start using that term
Our hero could barely suppress his emotions. The chance he was waiting for didn't appear.
Complete Martial Arts Attributes
Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu
Stop translating to Our Hero, it’s not in the raws and it breaks immersion.
Our hero found the room he wanted and waited outside for some time, then left quietly when he noticed that the other party wasn't planning to come out.
Complete Martial Arts Attributes
Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu
See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon
ch 0 -1 Author's Face-to-Face Talk
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
I highly doubt Wu Hong was a virgin for her mortal dust. Wang Wei should take revenge when he becomes a paragon or detached to make sure any person Wu Hong was with is a clone of his (and make sure she can’t remember his face or remembers a different face so it doesn’t affect the timeline)
"If you want to lose access to Little Wei, you can try."
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon
ch 1110 Depressing Mood
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao