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Overall this story has some interesting views but it’s…. How should I put it…. It sucks in story layout. For example she leaves to make her own path because her parents don’t listen. Then she comes back like a little child who never wanted to leave. How does that make sense? There should be very strong resentment towards her parents. After all she “supposedly” didn’t agree enough to run away and change her name.

Looks like a dead story

It’s a shame it’s been three months since last chapter.

Thank you for taking my suggestion. I very much appreciate it. If it got too dark I would have had to drop because it would be too stressful for me an I like this one as it took a interesting point of view. By the way the antarctic vibratium is supposed to have an anti metal properties that almost literally break down other metals. It was one of the reasons Tony was able to defeat Wolverine in another multiverse timeline. Well to be honest it doesn’t matter as there’s multiple timelines and it’s logical that there’s a few multi-verse timelines where there none so it’s understandable that there’s a few that don’t have those properties. I personally don’t like those properties so I’m kinda glad it’s left out. Maybe in the late stages he could make something like it but not so overpowering. I mean if one just needs to make a few cuts or shots and destroys all metals it’s kinda OP and destroys the story.

I’m kinda questioning why he seems to lose his guilt in literal brainwashing. Yeah he needs personal protection and his secrets safe but there should be a line in it. He just took a bunch of innocent people and set them up for it. Judging by the degree of negativity in his actions that are rising I’d say in 20 to 30 chapters he probably would set up virtual reality helmets for VR gaming with hidden brainwashing functions for all at this rate. I can’t speculate after that as it’s too far. I get that it was hinted that he is now like a Machine but he should realize his mortality is being affected. Other then that I can see his choices so far are in line with his original self (brainwashing part not included) though he is getting more aggressive in nature. That’s my thoughts on the story so far. Other then that please keep up the good work.

This is a really great story. Please add lots and lots more chapters to read please. 🙏🙏 I like how playful she is while exploring technology. While the MC was originally male it’s really nice to find a good story with a female protagonist. I’m very tired of BS male leads who think with their reproductive organs and or think of controlling everything including others.

It’s a really fun story. Even though I can list some things that can improve it but in doing so would destroy its value and worth in its own way. I look forward to seeing this story progress in the future.

Fully enjoyed this story so far. Very well written and thought out.

Really interesting story up to this point. Sadly I ran out of chapters to read.

I’ll be honest….. for someone who supposedly is just trying to get stronger acts kinda creepy with the quick response of using dark spells. Might as well let him go dark with how things are. I mean he felt nothing when killing people. Maybe he is a psychopath with his zero aversion to it. Also magic spells he used just doesn’t work the way described. For example the protronus spell releases an animal not a humanoid. What’s next a rock or puddle protronus? Also it’s a spiritual form. How can it defend physically? How can it attack physically? Let’s just assume it’s a gas. How can a gas block something? I mean just blow on it. That’s why it’s a spiritual form an as such it’s only use is to attack and defend against Dormentors who are immune to all other forms of attacks except spiritual ones.

I’m liking this story very much. The MC has a heart even though he controls the world and is very powerful. I like how the MC is able to explore other worlds like Stargate while also exploring his current world.

Not dropped but last updated 7+ months ago? Yeah if it was 1 month I’d be skeptical but see it as possible. Good start for a story but going for a kill like that after getting the memory from three spidermen? I’d be into believing that a domino effect elected a mouse as president is more likely. I get that the MC can see the need for doing something like that but there was no thought in it and let it pass like a psychopath would. I’m fairly sure that you described the MC as a good natured person and wanted to be a hero not an anti hero.

I hope the MC teaches Lucifer who’s boss

Reached chapter 62 and then required to use app. Sorry but I refuse on the grounds that browsers are better and apps are for disabled people who think everything should have an app. Was good until this point though.

Great light novel. I really enjoyed it.

I agree having meta human like abilities would be interesting but I just can’t see the MC doing something like that as Batman or the other two character as the template going that route. Maybe as a temporary kind of thing for fun just because he can but I’m fairly sure he would just toss it aside unless it’s part of a contingency plan of some sort. Currently he has access to magic power but so far there’s little need for him to actually integrate it as it’s not reliable unless he comes up with something. As for sage mode like power I can see it a little but would that level of power be helpful for anything able to destroy a city? Not trying to discourage the possibility mine you but could you see Batman trying to get powers? I do remember a few instances where Batman received powers but he himself gave them up without hesitation. Personally I’d find a telekinesis like ability to be interesting even if it’s only able to move around 5 pounds at maximum for a little while.

The mind is an internal power. How it reflects to reality is just different. That said external power is a concept in reference to a person who knows how to use external objects (like a gun or weapon) while internal power is being able to make things and use them above and beyond (for example making or building as well as using it.) I’m not sure if I explained it well enough. Anyways like the MC and author tried to explain in the beginning intelligence is the greatest superpower one could ever have if pared with the strongest will. With the MC’s intelligence you might as well consider him a above omega reality warper.

I believe he is making a point that even though he flipped the table he is willing to walk the walk. Plus to him he might just see it as a challenge of sorts. I mean how often does one really fight endless demons? Plus it didn’t really say anything about him being prepared when it started or if most gadgets got left behind due to reasons. If I was him I’d definitely be doing exactly what he is doing now.

While the story is a bit childish I really enjoy it.the character development is very good in my opinion. A lot of writers seem to forget to do that. PS. Can you use the two second stun frying pan a bit more. It’s very amusing. Thank you and congratulations by the way.

Thanks for the story. I enjoyed it. Only thing I kinda hoped for was maybe a love interest too? Not to be too detailed but just so he is not so much a loner in that aspect you know? Just a suggestion to think about. Anyways I’m off to read something else.