Idk where you're going with the Danzo stuff but honestly I dig the tension. The writing is good as always but maybe tone back on some of the exposition, or make it more concise. The explanations are important but they get kinda long. Thanks for another chapter :)
POV: You are a Man Utd fan.
AN - I'm sadly a Man Utd Fan too, but since this story has nothing to do with Football. We'll leave the sorry state of my club out of the discussions, Thank You!
Harry Potter: An SI's Story
Book&Literature · WN_LightNovels
...its your story bro, appreciate the heads up even if its not ideal.
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feels like I should be used to it now, didnt even take reading it halfway before realising nothing was going to happen. this is a great fic, but man its frustrating.
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thanks for the chapter
Really enjoying this, don't put pressure on yourself to cram everything in a couple chapters. Not sure how many plot points you still want to cover, or what they are, but maybe try to hit a couple per chapter? short flashbacks for the more minor plot points could also work.
"The Art Of Seduction And Persuasion. A Shinobi's Way of Information Extraction, Coercion, Seduction, and more! Clearance Level - Chunin."
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
Great chapter. It was nice to see him reveal something, as well as enjoy it. Looking forward to the genin arc, gonna be interesting with the team selection.
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes