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Idk where you're going with the Danzo stuff but honestly I dig the tension. The writing is good as always but maybe tone back on some of the exposition, or make it more concise. The explanations are important but they get kinda long. Thanks for another chapter :)
ch 18 Unseen Growth, Unveiled Might
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
POV: You are a Man Utd fan.
AN - I'm sadly a Man Utd Fan too, but since this story has nothing to do with Football. We'll leave the sorry state of my club out of the discussions, Thank You!
Harry Potter: An SI's Story
Book&Literature · WN_LightNovels
...its your story bro, appreciate the heads up even if its not ideal.
Before you start reading, I have to come out with something. I very much admire the story G3 created with his amazing writing skills. However, and this may make some just not read the story anymore, I will be adding elements of romance in this fanfic and maybe R18 scenes for later arcs with the MC and the main cast. Maybe even a 'multi-relationship' (I find the word harem a bit degrading for the females) if I find away not to make it cringe or if it degrades the quality of the fanfic. However, for various reasons, which I will not explain, Nephis isn't included.
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
ch 0 5 Chapter V: Mountaintop Castle
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
thanks for the chapter
ch 15 A Peaceful Road Trip
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
Really enjoying this, don't put pressure on yourself to cram everything in a couple chapters. Not sure how many plot points you still want to cover, or what they are, but maybe try to hit a couple per chapter? short flashbacks for the more minor plot points could also work.
ch 14 Beyond Guilt Lies Strength/Beware The Fool.
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
"The Art Of Seduction And Persuasion. A Shinobi's Way of Information Extraction, Coercion, Seduction, and more! Clearance Level - Chunin."
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
He gave Riddle a smug look, took out the Colt, pointed it towards the source of the World Serpent, and fired.
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
its gonna be interesting to see how mc deals with danzo. I cant really see it going well if he hasnt learned to control his emotions a bit more, but then again it could be the start of the ROOT akira arc, which could also be an interesting way to force him to progress his strength. Lots of options, defintely excited for more.
ch 12 A Massacre Followed By Another
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
Idk about whether it was because of the "reincarnated into a child body" thing, but having him lose it after one mention of his family feels a little weak. I do hope that his immaturity and hotheadedness tone down as he gets older, its a little grating having a nara and reincarnated person acting so childish.
Heyo people! I hope you liked the chapter and it was satisfactory for you! I was a little stressed out when writing this chapter so I hope stress won't show its horrid power and ruin the chapter's quality! I hope it was an entertaining read nonetheless!
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
thanks for the chapter, love the powers and characters and stuff. Pacing is fine? difficult to tell when the fic is new, but im glad you didnt skip over the academy. Really hoping for some cool stuff with the shadow movement, idk if youve read shadow slave or not but maybe take inspo from that?
ch 0 8 A Taste Of Power
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
this is a cool development, but wouldn’t fiendfyre need a lot of magical power? magical power that riddle doesn’t have, hence the whole possessing and stealing life force thing.
Before the young Potter could revel in his coming victory, his opponent did something unthinkable, something that Harry would describe later as the desperate actions of a mad teenager. Tom Riddle summoned Fiendfyre in the middle of Hogwarts.
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
loving this story, cant wait for the cool stuff he makes in the future
ch 0 9 Bringing-A-Taser-To-A-Gunfight(chapter 10)
DC: with D&D Artificer
TV · Lythan_Page
might be a longshot, but transfiguration/animagus stories are some of my favourites. could be a good way to disguise and hide from other supernaturals, hiding his scent by turning into an inconspicuous animal like a cat or owl or smth.
Comment if you have any ideas you would like to see implanted in the story or any magic you would like Orion to learn .
TVD: The Tribrid Legacy
TV · ParadiseHeights
too much imo, hes already the honored one
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Honoured One of Young Justice
Anime & Comics · Honoured_Writer
Great chapter. It was nice to see him reveal something, as well as enjoy it. Looking forward to the genin arc, gonna be interesting with the team selection.
ch 19 Shifting Tides
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes