It needed more because it ended with a beginning of either more chapters or another book the details were amazingly graphic. The details made it so real I feel that you could have written more story around the exceptionally graphic details of the sexual experiences but you left much out of the story line to put around the excitement of your details also you could add a bit of romance and a touch of lovemaking at least a bit.
Fantasy · ktish7
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Webnovel
It needed more because it ended with a beginning of either more chapters or another book the details were amazingly graphic. The details made it so real I feel that you could have written more story around the exceptionally graphic details of the sexual experiences but you left much out of the story line to put around the excitement of your details also you could add a bit of romance and a touch of lovemaking at least a bit.
The Ritual (Werewolf Erotica)
Fantasy · ktish7