Nikhil_Mukherjee

3yr

Commented

Nice one. It's becoming more exciting with more chapters.

ch 0 6 Blazing Beast

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Nikhil_Mukherjee

3yr

Commented

Great!!! Really loved it

ch 0 5 Ant Queen And The Beast

STRUGGLE OF THE FORLORN

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Nikhil_Mukherjee

3yr

Commented

It is becoming interesting with each chapter. Brilliant writing!

ch 0 3 1 VS ARMY

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Nikhil_Mukherjee

3yr

Commented

Gajab!!!

ch 0 2 Inside The Cave

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Nikhil_Mukherjee

3yr

Posted

It is indeed a brilliant and novel idea. I have not heard of anything like this before. This shows the extent of the author's imagination. The setting is great, the characterisation and the monsters are great. Can't wait to find out what interesting creatures are out there. What a three old kid is about to do to get out of this strange forest, how he got here or what is so special in him? These questions are blowing my mind since I read this chapter. If the first chapter is so great, I wonder what is about to unfold in the further chapters. Honestly, looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Hope to find some great action soon.

STRUGGLE OF THE FORLORN

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Nikhil_Mukherjee

3yr

Commented

Brilliant hook! Great idea! Really looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Too eager to know what happens next. I have never heard or read such interesting story. Best of luck!

ch 0 1 Opened My Eyes

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