Webnovel Author: iseeyfn - Novel Collection

unless covid 19 f things up =x

spouse would be back end of the month which would more time to write :)

sorry upload schedule as of now is a bit hard to say at the moment. partly due to work and kids and now bad health which i thought should have recovered some time back but it seems the initial doctor did a bad job. 2nd doctor i saw 2 days ago gave me a proper check up and meds thou :) trying to log in to write when i can.

nah who would loan a kid barely 18 with no job nor finance to back the loan?

lol

ahh yes deleted the entire scene since it was too much for some readers. will try to get back to this chapter to change this.

a practice that happens frequently in real life, unfortunately. Had a friend who had to pay his wife parents a 6 figure sum to marry his wife. when I first heard it I found it weird. Why would someone sell their daughter? But it seem like it is actually something very common to them =x

actually been running a few simulation in my mind. but it still adds up. 1) because the players are forcefully removed from the game after 12 hour 2) you can say technically time in the game is 1:5 (since 60/12) 3) issue would occur if say there is a game time calendar which it does not have and need not have as announcement on event can be base on real time. kinda drunk now actually lol hopefully i have thought through it enough. Maybe we can discuss this in discord?

Roger that will take that into consideration...funny how it was something i am trying to avoid actually...afraid of getting her too aggressive for the readers liking. I think because of the culture setting. There were feedback about xin ru being too slutty from the first nsfw =x as such it did affect me mentally when i write about her. Also because of her being his first woman in the harem. I can see this role for 2 person in his possible future harem...one of which is already introduce in the story Liu Yu Han since it would fit her straightforward personality but currently i am half decided on adding her into the harem. The other someone not introduced yet so far. Thanks for the feedback! For the latest chapter, I kept your words in mind and now am more clear on what you feel is lacking. I can definitely do it for one of the girls in the future (well at least this is base on my experience. Asian girls who are more vocal is a bit not that common but than again the younger generations may be different =p half decided on who the next NSFW scene will be with but if it is Liu Yu Han i will definitely try what you mentioned.

ya i agree could be better. in fact the story has been affected quite a little ever since i had to juggle job and parenting full time since my spouse is stuck overseas. Pretty hard when you start writing n your kids keep interfering which is why i try to squeeze in as much as could when they are asleep and nothing is on hand which is rare...like today. At times i just type till 2am and almost fall asleep lol ok back to writing first will take note of the feedback and see how to better it.

lol was expecting this but just as the next comment state I do try and add story progression to it. Also partly how i view sex as mention in the author comment. Always start with a wham bam and after the relationship mature u will find the sex different. And this arc is one such different type. To be fair too my chapters are 1200 words now compared to 1500 initially. As such 3 chapter is 3600 word. Before it was 3000 words...not much of a difference actually

hi i reread the part and seems ok..it states he pushed the door for 30 minutes with breaks in between.

time for me to close my eyes and KO thou =p hope you enjoy the chapter.

congratz! lol