Just someone who wants to write casual stories Contact at lithkren.2@gmail.com if you enjoy my work(s?)
2021-02-23 Joined Global
Thank you so much! Your comments mean a lot to me, I usually don't get a lot of them lol but it's honestly really nice to get any amount of feedback, even just minor things like spelling mistakes are super helpful
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Fantasy · Lithkren
i wish i had the money to comission some art lol
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Fantasy · Lithkren
Aisha prefers cuddling face-to-face :3
Aisha laid her head on Miiha's shoulder, wrapping her arms around her chest. Miiha's face turned bright red. Even though this was the second time they had shared a bed, Aisha's complete lack of regard for… personal space still left her flustered. She shivered as Aisha pressed her nose into her neck.
Fantasy · Lithkren
Aisha is about 4'9 at that point in the story.
ch 19 Aisha's First Contract
Fantasy · Lithkren
oop! just a typo, thanks for pointing it out!
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Fantasy · Lithkren
thanks for continuing to read!
ch 102 Outsider
Fantasy · Lithkren
See chapter 90 - thank you for the comment!
ch 99 Stakes
Fantasy · Lithkren
Ah, reading back, I realize that you're right - it was my intention to convey that Aisha was losing the fight, (rather badly) but I realize now that I rushed through the scene far too quickly, and have given the impression that Aisha was on top the entire time. I will definitely add and change a few scenes to try to fix this. Thank you for the comment, this was super helpful!
ch 97 The Sacrifice - Part 1
Fantasy · Lithkren
Oh, these are supposed to be the entries that Aisha have read. I'll try to make that clearer!
ch 96 Ex Machina
Fantasy · Lithkren
Thanks for the follow up! This is genuinely very helpful for me, and I'm glad you took the time to write. I do rewrite and change chapters of the story often - I'll make them clear in the author notes in the future. But again, thank you for the honest feedback!
ch 94 Unfeeling
Fantasy · Lithkren
no, at least not for the foreseeable future.
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Fantasy · Lithkren
ah, my bad. Fixed
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Fantasy · Lithkren
Thanks for the criticism! I'll keep that in mind. What I had intended was for Aisha to slowly care more and more about her friends and other people, and how she treats them - but if that wasn't made clear then I will be sure to try and improve.
ch 94 Unfeeling
Fantasy · Lithkren
thank you for the comment! <3
ch 93 Heart
Fantasy · Lithkren
Maybe! That certainly is a good idea, although I do have other side stories lined up. Maybe I'll make a poll.
ch 87 Corrosion
Fantasy · Lithkren
You might be reading too much into it :P. The demon Aisha killed was male, but the demon inside of Aisha is flat because Aisha is flat.
ch 82 Community Service
Fantasy · Lithkren
that's great! Im so glad you think the action was good. To answer your question about the part where Aisha grabs the demon's leg - She is sharing her mind with the shadow, and that's why all the thoughts come out as her own. Thank you for the comment!
ch 78 Evolution
Fantasy · Lithkren
the period is just a way for me to organize my thoughts. my eyesight isnt very good so i put the periods there to help me tell where the breaks are and how many. generally the amount of breaks is how long the "pause" is between story beats or ideas, or at least thats how i try to organize them in my head
Vanishing Embers
Fantasy · Lithkren