I think you mixed up Harik and Bargrux’s names for this paragraph and the 3 after it
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Games · Antihero
I hate bringing another novel into this comment section, but are you planning to pick up My Monster Hero Life anytime soon? Or at all? I saw that you planned to a while ago after the spirity awards, but it still hasn’t happened. Just curious, love your work on this one and for sure will check out your other novels.
ch 258 A Stormy Night (Part 1)
Games · Antihero
“Validate that title”
"Hahaha, whether it's early or not merely depends on perception. To me, your existence alone is enough to validity that title." Tilis replied.
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
From what I read, it sounds more like a failed partial reincarnation saved by random chance. MC was reincarnated, but his memories and sense of self were separated into two different newborns. The newborn with his sense of self happens to have an ability that allows him to regain his memories from the other newborn. I might be completely wrong, but that’s the way that makes sense to me.
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Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
I hate to bring up one of your other novels in this one’s comment section, but are you going to update Mayhem Online anytime soon? Or are you going to keep focusing on Versatile Superstar for the time being?
ch 264 Chapter 264. Graphic novel release
Fantasy · DreamThree
You switch from past to present tense in the last sentence of this paragraph and it continues for most of the chapter. I don’t know about other people, but the change was unexpected enough that it completely broke the immersion in the fight before it even really began, if you ever do a mass re-edit, I suggest that you not switch tenses. If this was intentional for some reason I don’t understand, I apologize, so please ignore this comment if that is the case.
The Behemoth started sprinting at full speed, reeling its arm back and slamming it into Tokita's chest before he could react. It sent him spinning into the stone wall. Getting out of it, he feels the blood leaking down his head and tells Danna to hide.
Fantasy · RealNetturop
DId you drop the novel? Die? Become paralyzed? This is one of the novels with huge potential that use a protag that evolve from eating things in my opinion, so I think we all at least want to know if you plan on or are able to come back.
ch 106 Chapter 106: Unexpected bonus
Fantasy · Valtura
Hasn’t he killed like 40 people already? Will he only gain EXP now that he knows the system exists?
- Level : 1 (0/150 XP)
Fantasy · MagusRex
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Wolf in Sheeps Clothing
Fantasy · Antihero
And it seems mixed up one more time here
Pantheon Online
Games · Antihero