Not bad for a Naruto hokage story. The story kept me interested with all the different characters from different universes. The story does feel strange when you think about all the different worlds that are connected to each other through the different characters.Like what happens to each world the characters are removed from, after joining the main world. You really do have to be comfortable with leaving behind many plot holes and loose ends that will most likely go nowhere. I kind of expect it for a fanfic story but was actually surprised with the amount that shows up. All in all, it was enjoyable for a story with no harem and romance. The grammar is not bad like mtl but it is not perfect. It has your typical gender change pronouns (she instead of he), and incorrect names used (hashirama instead of Madara). After reading though many fanfics I kind of just got used to all different Grammer issues and autocorrect it in my head. So it was pretty comfortable for me to read without losing my pace and focus because of the incorrect grammar.
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Not bad for a Naruto hokage story. The story kept me interested with all the different characters from different universes. The story does feel strange when you think about all the different worlds that are connected to each other through the different characters.Like what happens to each world the characters are removed from, after joining the main world. You really do have to be comfortable with leaving behind many plot holes and loose ends that will most likely go nowhere. I kind of expect it for a fanfic story but was actually surprised with the amount that shows up. All in all, it was enjoyable for a story with no harem and romance. The grammar is not bad like mtl but it is not perfect. It has your typical gender change pronouns (she instead of he), and incorrect names used (hashirama instead of Madara). After reading though many fanfics I kind of just got used to all different Grammer issues and autocorrect it in my head. So it was pretty comfortable for me to read without losing my pace and focus because of the incorrect grammar.
Eight Hundred Hokage
Anime & Comics · nyawdao2