Awesome I'll keep reading!
I really like having the shy girl as the main protag especially in combo with the more outgoing friend who's a bit more put together. There's always a lot of good play with that dynamic. Especially in romantically centered stories like I think this one is shaping into. Moving into chapter 2 I go. Also, everyone has had that long-term crush it's super relatable.
ch 0 1 Today's the Day
History · SkyEmpress
So we're a writer group and the way I envisioned these parts that preempt the chapter itself are just meant to be narration to give insight into the events surrounding the chapter or quotes that help explain relevant concepts. So, in other words, yea 3rd person would be better here. But, my partner who wrote the first few chapters was just getting used to this mechanic.
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Fantasy · Arcana_Legends
I am a writer. I don't really want to be known but I'd like my series to be.
If yes, do you ever want to be a known top writer? Why and why not? You must answer this question. Skip it for bad luck.
Fantasy · meixiaolian
Everyone needs goals.lol
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Fantasy · Arcana_Legends
This story is good the concept is very well developed. I really like the reference to Asimov and making an NPC in a game is an extremely interesting choice.
NPC Code: Red Riding Hood
Fantasy · kuhaku_sora