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You're welcome☺

My intention is not to demean your work, just giving my opinions and sharing experience while reading. If you find yourself offended, well then my apologies.

The plotline of the novel is good, and I as a veteran Webnovel reader find much potential to be unearthed. One thing I would like to suggest is the tone of dialogues for different characters, it feels as though same character is speaking for others as well. It might be subconscious action, but I think someone would find it uncomfortable while reading because I surely do. However, if you work on it, it might get better with time. Good luck for your future endeavors.

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