I like that you give (seemingly) peripheral characters thoughts and words (which are often amusing too so they don’t feel distracting). Creates a feel that anyone can matter in a world that’s deeper than two or three people plus a bunch of inanimate props. :)
ch 11 The First Day
Fantasy · Lithkren
Kyo might guess Mads already knows she’s not pregnant because she’s drinking. Sweet couple though!
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My Yuri Harem
General · Opinionhooman