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Replied to BookDevourer87

Ah once again someone tries to apply modern day logic to a completely FICTIONAL story, with FICTIONAL powers.

This was the ability of Dragon Fire Curse. It could instantly ignite every flammable object on fire. Combined with Kzarka's demonic essence and his advanced fire element Qi, the domain fire's temperature could jump from room temperature to 50,000 Celsius in an instant. 

Villain Cultivator

Villain Cultivator

Eastern · DamnPlotArmor

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Replied to Jay_Murphy_9639

He can’t genius, obviously you didn’t read the skill description of his mind control ability😕

Then suddenly, a huge, brown, scaly worm erupted from the ground like a volcano, completely swallowing Neia whole. Her arm got severed and flew off landing right in front of the group. 

The Great Demon System

The Great Demon System

Fantasy · Drip

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This is the first WN I’ve read on this app and I’ve read around 50 other WN’s inbetween this WN and the review (I used other sites to read WN’s until I actually made an account), so my memory might be a bit hazy in terms of story development and world background. Writing Quality: 3.7/5 If I was the author I’d use a broader range of vocabulary, be more descriptive (quantity), and just have a detailed description (quality) if things like the surroundings, fights, etc. Writing Stability: 5/5 Not much to say here, 7-8 chapters a week consistently which is very good imo. Story Development: 3.2/5 Some plot holes here and there but nothing too major to the point where it’s detrimental to the story. It’s still too early to comment on this since this WN feels like it’ll easily be over 1000 chapters. I just hope the pace doesnt skyrocket out of nowhere and just becomes like your average cultivation novel right before the typical “holy continent” arc. Character Design: 3.5/5 It’s an odd mix of some characters are bland, some have an alright design, and some feel like actual humans. The MC has some dumb things about his personality like being overly paranoid of the system and his sponser. This category was originally going to be a 2.5/5, but after reading the recent chapters it looks like the huge main female cast might finally be getting some character development, so I decided to bump it to a 3.5/5. World Background: 3/5 From what I’ve read so far this has the potential to be a 5/5 if the author plans ahead carefully and doesn’t rush the rest of the story. In general, we haven’t been told that much about the world and beyond it, but it’s clear that the author has plans to talk about everything more in depth later on in the story. This is my completely objective review so even though i gave it an overall rating of 3.6/5 that doesn’t mean that it wasn’t entertaining or that i didn’t enjoy it. When VC reaches the 550 chapter mark I’ll update this review and make it way more detailed and in-depth, but until then the review stays as is. I hope everyone that reads this has a good day, cya💯

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Replied to Phantomc42

90% of what you mentioned is already extremely common in many other webnovels.

"Magical Equipment is made out of body parts of magical beasts such as scales and teeth that can be found on different planets and from rare ores and materials aswell. They are an imperative part of any soldier's arsenal. When humans were finally able to travel past the milky way galaxy, we discovered that in other galaxies there are really powerful beast-like creatures that provide materials for weapons and armour. These creatures are now known as magical beasts"

The Great Demon System

The Great Demon System

Fantasy · Drip

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Replied to I_Love_Ahi

Oh that’s scientifically impossible? But I guess creating massive wind blades with a fictional type of energy is scientifically possible huh😕

Suddenly Moby's thoughts were interrupted as he heard 5 footsteps 2 Kilometres away headed straight for his direction.

The Great Demon System

The Great Demon System

Fantasy · Drip

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Replied to Phantomc42

Over half of what you mentioned are things that countless other webnovels have/do.

As soon as he saw that person, Moby had terrible flashbacks to his time in his previous school. The person in front of him was by far one of the biggest bullies he had dealt with. His name is Eric Quinn.

The Great Demon System

The Great Demon System

Fantasy · Drip

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I like how everyone here is ignoring the fact that it’s literally impossible for any country to monopolize even one of the beams.

Since all the beams of light were more than enough energy for a single nation to even use 1% of its capacity, wars over them did not start and humans banded together to fix many of the problems plaguing the entire world since its inception.

The Great Demon System

The Great Demon System

Fantasy · Drip

BigManGuts
Replied to Earthshaker34

No, the system said he couldn’t change their innate skills until he becomes a true immortal.

Special Ability: can burst up to 2 times its maximum speed. (10 second duration, can be upgraded)

Bored Gamer in Other Worlds

Bored Gamer in Other Worlds

Fantasy · The_Procrastinator

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Replied to Conquerer007

Exactly

Sikong Cui knew that Zhu Cheng wanted to extort some high-quality herbs from her, but that didn't mean she wasn't curious about Yun Jhin's battle power, some herbs weren't worth much to her as she could have as many as she wanted, being the prized daughter of the matriarch of the house.

My Journey to Godhood as a Caterpillar

My Journey to Godhood as a Caterpillar

Eastern · KaiokenGuy

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Replied to Ihatethisite

Get a life, Jesus😕

In such a patriarchal society like the cultivation one, marrying off a daughter wasn't of high importance, but who she was married off too was important.

My Journey to Godhood as a Caterpillar

My Journey to Godhood as a Caterpillar

Eastern · KaiokenGuy

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Replied to CantWrite

I see you haven’t been reading the past 75 chapters with your eyes open huh😕

The man's eyes started to darken as he saw his own heart being extracted from his chest, Yun Jhin opened his maw like a deadly predator and ate the heart then licked his fingers, the lifeless body dropped to the ground and Yun Jhin took his spatial ring, no one saw him doing the killing so even if the man had some important background how could they pin the blame on him?

My Journey to Godhood as a Caterpillar

My Journey to Godhood as a Caterpillar

Eastern · KaiokenGuy

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