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Of all tge sports you choose baseball

A crack of the wood and homemade baseball colliding and I am off the home plate on my way to first base.

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

Book&Literature · Pretending_Author

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Of course it's Syrio Forel

The braavosi man smiled and introduced himself, "Syrio Forel. You fought well. Just keep on practising your footwork and don't always tilt towards your left when you are slashing at your opponent. It makes you predictable."

Game of Thrones: Lord of the Seven Seas

Game of Thrones: Lord of the Seven Seas

Book&Literature · Axel_wheel

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Cringe

"I'm Damian Silvius Stark from on," Damian whispered to himself as he looked at the ceiling or more specifically, at the panel that he could see hovering in front of him.

Game of Thrones: Lord of the Seven Seas

Game of Thrones: Lord of the Seven Seas

Book&Literature · Axel_wheel

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11mth
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And honestly, why would you even want elf ears that's just handicap. Because people or ministry will consider you non-human and they could even put you under beast category, like warewolves.

'That's right before the events of the goblet of fire then , I can work with that.' he thought calmly. "Until then it's business as usual I guess." he mutters before yawning and getting out of bed to start his day.-

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

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Their divine like beauty also. There is reason Legolas is fan favourite 😂😂

'That's right before the events of the goblet of fire then , I can work with that.' he thought calmly. "Until then it's business as usual I guess." he mutters before yawning and getting out of bed to start his day.-

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

nik_rad
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No worries mate. I quite like this story, it's believable and canon characters are well written. Inly complaint that i have is that you said that MC will have pointy ears, because lotr elves didn't havr pointy ears that's a Peter Jackson idea adding that to movies. But that's just me being LOTR nerd and i will not be dropping this story just because of that. Thank for you work and i hope you enjoy writing this because that is the most important thing.

All of this said I am not just venting my issues here at everyone , I truly do appreciate that others read my stories and enjoy them and I even enjoy when people ask reasonable questions like "Does his avian dominion apply to Thestrals or veela's?" things like that. It makes me happy to see people engaging with the story and trying to figure out what I am setting up for the future and what is actually just fluff. For everyone who isn't part of the groups this is targeted at I apologize that you were subjected to this post and ask for your understanding.

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

nik_rad
11mth
Replied to lordhokage

Elves in the books never had pointy ears. That's a movie thing

'That's right before the events of the goblet of fire then , I can work with that.' he thought calmly. "Until then it's business as usual I guess." he mutters before yawning and getting out of bed to start his day.-

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

nik_rad
11mth
Replied to loskro

Elves of the lord of the rings books never had pointy ears. That's a movie thing

'That's right before the events of the goblet of fire then , I can work with that.' he thought calmly. "Until then it's business as usual I guess." he mutters before yawning and getting out of bed to start his day.-

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

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More plot, less fluff.

- Would you guys enjoy a relentless assault of fluff with some plot? Or much more plot going on with the fluff as a stress relief?

HP: Eagle Soars

HP: Eagle Soars

Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH

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World building but just right amount, don't over do it.

- Would you guys prefer an extremely detailed, well developed Wizarding World and Magic? Or would you prefer at as background development while we focus on plot & fluff?

HP: Eagle Soars

HP: Eagle Soars

Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH

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Slow

- Would you prefer an accelerated plot, until Magnus meets his love interest? Or would you like to continue with the slow development?

HP: Eagle Soars

HP: Eagle Soars

Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH

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I don't get why you are making Mangus feel betrayed by Flitwick. Headmaster asked to speak with student, seem pretty normal to me. So why he is feeling betrayed, because Flitwick doesn't share his opinion of Dumbledore?

But never did he predict that a worried McGonagall would charge it him with a speed he didn't associate with the middle-aged woman, yet instead of a fierce attack or ruthless sermon he might receive from the strict professor he admired so much, what he receives was a warm hug.

HP: Eagle Soars

HP: Eagle Soars

Book&Literature · SHEOGORATH

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Hhahahahahahahahhahahahaha, oh my god that is golden😂. Win her heart Pfftt

At that moment he already made up his mind, he was going to win her heart no matter what it took, he would also make sure she didn't die. Even thinking of the way she went out has his pissed, but he soon calmed down the images were blurry so he at best only remembered a little of it but he knew how to stop it all.

The Beggars Rise

The Beggars Rise

TV · BloodyEat_Delight

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