if "you" lose, it suppose to be "I".
Shen Ping smiled and said, "I know that you don't believe me. Do you dare to make a bet? If I win, you will follow me from now on. If you lose, I will give you 100,000 high-grade immortal spirit stones."
Eastern · Cucumber Lover
Inconsistent names that mix with other names on the earlier chapters. There are names with inconsistent translation. Please stick with one translated name to prevent confusion.
Eastern · Dancing Silly Cat
Please change the english name of characters to Chinese language because of inconsistency of language in the story. If mc name is Chinese then other name is must be either Chinese or pinyin, for example, Calm Sky.
Fantasy · Angel
please translate qingyun sect to English t its equivalency.
ch 171 The Clear Sky Secret Realm
Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
I like this story overall except the translation of name of characters. There are incosistents in names. For example, in the beginning of the story, the name of the baby is Arthur but in the latter episode, his name is Anthony. I want consistency of names of characters. I don’t mind using Chinese names in the story. In fact, I prefer using Chinese name in the story for the sake of easy translation. If your translate it to english name, please make it consisntent throughtout of the story.
Fantasy · Magic Principal
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
if "you" lose, it suppose to be "I".
Shen Ping smiled and said, "I know that you don't believe me. Do you dare to make a bet? If I win, you will follow me from now on. If you lose, I will give you 100,000 high-grade immortal spirit stones."
Eternal Life Begins with Taking a Wife
Eastern · Cucumber Lover