Tacosrule123

Review chapter 10: Novel is going good until his name starts switching back between his english name and Chinese name. Because of this it got very confusing fast.

Here is my honest take after reading 10 chapters. There are TONS of grammar mistakes that makes it feel like it's a translated novel. I had to turn my brain off while reading some of the chapters unfortunately and that made me loose interest in the novel. The world building is very well done though and it was interesting so far. From what I have seen it is being updated frequently which is nice and I would rate this higher if the author just fixes the grammar mistakes that are present. From what I have also seen so far the MC is not bad so far. But, just a little weirdly written; I say this since he basically forces the blacksmiths daughter to work with him.

I was able to get 11 chapters in than I had to stop. I enjoyed this novel but the constant cussing just seems forced for no damn reason. It just makes the protagonist feels stupider with how much he cusses. From what I have read so far though, the grammar was great, the background was alright(I believe more will be told later down the road), and the character building was subpar. All in all, if the author just lowers the amount of cussing the novel would be good.

Just off of reading the first 5ish chapters, I can 100% already tell this is a shitty Chinese novel. The translation isn't bad. But, the way sentences are worded just hurts reading. If you are able to turn your brain off you would most likely like this.

Warning to anyone that's even considering reading this novel. This Author has a habit of writing super good novels. But, he/she will drop it and never pick it up again.