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OH GOD!!. Why did he say everything about himself. What stupidity is this. How can you trust her when you just literally met her. Isn't this world supposed to be dog eat dog world where strength is everything. Wth kind of situation is this?!!!

wth kind of cliche is this. Everything was going good till now, but then this girl came, and everything is so cliche!! Somebody just remove this girl, and I hope no more cliche chapters are there....

everything was going great. But why did you have to spoil it by choosing bow? You could have taken sword, saber, dagger, spear. why bow? 😭

Now I understand why some people hate harems.... All because of these cliche plot. Though loving the rest of the story except the romantic part

Nice Chap.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

when He gets stronger, Will he force other people to stop eating meat?? That will be Bad no???

I think I know who the anomaly is in this world. ITS LAFFITTE

This MC is just another typical one piece fanfic MC, who thinks he will become too OP and all. now just as he entered Marineford. HE CHallenges Garp. I mean what is wrong with you. Please make it exciting, we dont want an arrogant MC who thinks he is the god of this world with his power.

Dear author, Now thats what I call Recaps. Just one paragraph. Although I feel recaps are unnecessary, I dont mind reading short recaps. Thank you

Recaps are unusually long. Why are you irritating the readers. Nobody wants to read Recaps. Its a waste of time. so stop wasting our time. and dont you dare use recaps just to fill the words. The story is awesome I love it. But just the recaps part spoil all the mood of reading.

This is getting irritating. Why do you have half of the story as a recap. This is utter nonsense.

Man you got some problems buddy.

Isnt he had satans choosen one as innate trait.

Cant argue with authors choices. But it is his own imagination. But I cant help but express dissatisfaction from this chapter. their was no need to disclose his identity. And then again, I couldn't understand the conversation b/w MC and Narcissa. This whole chapter is disappointing. But overall I am really curious whats next?!!!!