toldert

5mth

Commented

Don't bother with this book. Chapters are very short, and free chapers end at ch 6.Author: fix those issues and I will come back.

Connor McDonald rode an electric bike to the Seven Days Hotel, colloquially known as the Lovers Haven, to deliver food.

Getting $10 Trillion Out Of Nowhere

Urban · Silent Wind

toldert

6mth

Commented

Sooo much contained in a single paragraph. This beautifully subtle bit of prose is full of blatant metaphor. Wonderful piece of writing!

"Hmm, your left wife left, and your right and main wife will be ignoring you from now on… how troublesome, this will leave your dragon lonely. Haa… alright, alright I will be kind enough to help you solve the problem by removing it. Though I obviously will not be touching it, don't worry, although my steel sword is not as sharp as Fairy Hua's it should do the work. Huh? What did you say? You think the treasures the dragon sleeps on will be unnecessary after the dragon is gone? I agree. Don't worry so much, we will remove anything unnecessary…"

Dual Cultivation God Returns

Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion

toldert

6mth

Commented

Mega Huge Inn - - - > not that big, maybe 3 stories tall...*face palm*I just can't even come up with words.

House not that big, a most 3 stories tall stood mightily on the land. The house was built facing another which made a gap between them, which is the street.

Infinite Mana in the Mage Academy

Fantasy · Wringbro

toldert

7mth

Commented

Getting nutrients from stuff even the mice don't bother with? No wonder he is so weak.

Uriel, though, didn't have enough money for a proper meal. All he had for breakfast, lunch and dinner was instant noodles. Vegetables and meat were a luxury most second class citizens like him couldn't afford, but he was content with his meal as it had most of the nutrients a person should need.

Dungeon Raider System

Urban · NanaiSensei

toldert

11mth

Commented

Wasn't he inside the tower? That tower would have to be massive.

He only flew a distance of ten kilometers.

Guarding the Wizard Tower for 100 years, I Become Invincible When I Come out

Fantasy · Huang Tian Dead Already

toldert

1yr

Posted

It is a good start. Looking forward to new chapters.

Dragon-blooded Wizard

Fantasy · Love Apple

toldert

1yr

Commented

Hmmm

[Loot: Two units of Black Iron-Tier Mist Core (Drop Rate: 100%), one Racial Enhancement Skill Book - Mental Manipulation (Drop Rate: 0.01%), one White Platinum-Tier Advance Grade Racial Talent Sphere (Drop Rate: 0.0001%)]