Hi this comment is for Jasmine, I am really enjoying your novel so far. You do an excellent job leaving the writer wanting to discover more and in creating a unique character like Lucian. I am a writer and editor myself. Please reach out if you would like a few suggestions for word choice, grammar, etc that would take your writing to the next level. Have you considered publishing your work? Let me know! -Lilac
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Fantasy · JasmineJosef
I have read a bunch of stories on this app now. But this is the best one so far. It is a gem! It is so well written! Part mystery, part romance, part ?? ...But all of it is wonderful! 😄
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Urban · TheRedQueen