I think it should be time to be more serious in the upcoming chapters, these jokes are getting annoying and repetitive, at the start it was funny yeah but i can read many fanfictions like this
ch 86 Chapter 81 Payback
Anime & Comics · DJDAN
Rimuru x Gazel?
ch 73 Chapter 68 Gazel is popular?
Anime & Comics · DJDAN
I hope youre gonna use the black hole energy creator that was given to Berreta in the after stories for something. I think it couldve been a good idea to use it for someone, maybe even an OC
ch 66 Chapter 61 Mikoto wants a training montage
Anime & Comics · DJDAN
author has probably other way than the originak
ch 57 Chapter 53 Press F to pay respects to Orc Disaster
Anime & Comics · DJDAN
you really love meat buns after all, mr author
ch 47 Chapter 43 Dryad Visit
Anime & Comics · DJDAN
when rimuru gettin some sword
ch 38 Chapter 35 Ogres and Orcs
Anime & Comics · DJDAN
thx
ch 27 Chapter 25 Sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh...
Anime & Comics · DJDAN
i think you should let rimuru eat shizu bcs rimuru with the body is hot🤤
ch 26 Chapter 24 A talk
Anime & Comics · DJDAN
For real, like bro. You’re a weak child compared to Izuna who was defeated, what you gonna do?
ch 218 211. Kage Vs Kage
Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
Okay so.. this novel is starting off great but there are some problems which i personally think you should fix 1st - the writing quality. dont get me wrong here, it is average or even above on this app but the dialogues are like they lack the “humanism”. when there is a dialogue, it feels like programmed robots talking. try to add more dots, !, ? and other things that would make the writing quality more readable and more comfortable to read 2nd - there are too little details - for an example, i totally have no ideo how the characters look, while some people like little details, you should still atleast try to explain how the main cast looks 3rd - fast pacing - again, some people will like this, some will not but the story we have now, feels a little too fast for me otherwise, this is a good novel that you can probably expect good things from in the future (i hope), so as of now, i reccomend it to read this, because the story is interesting enough and good luck to the author with this project[img=recommend]
Fallen Angel.
Fantasy · Kujiro