So far I’m liking the novel although I the pace is awfully slow and to be honest using 2 time skips like that feels just like lazy writing. While most the characters are fine (except the mc) their interactions feel dull after a while. And i’ll be honest, although I like reading long novels and chapters I hate it when it’s done without a good reason and has me skipping entire sections because most of it feels liKe filler. My recommendation would be to avoid using lazy time skips, some character growth (For someone who supposedly is always calm the mc’s decisions are all rushed and affer everything that has happened he should have learned from it), and finally just avoid over explaining everything as it just makes all the chapters feel shorter than they are, I don’t a 100 description about something the doesnt really matter... Oh and watch your grammar.
Fantasy · zad1333
is it wrong to think with ur penis?
Eastern · DamnPlotArmor
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Webnovel 
So far I’m liking the novel although I the pace is awfully slow and to be honest using 2 time skips like that feels just like lazy writing. While most the characters are fine (except the mc) their interactions feel dull after a while. And i’ll be honest, although I like reading long novels and chapters I hate it when it’s done without a good reason and has me skipping entire sections because most of it feels liKe filler. My recommendation would be to avoid using lazy time skips, some character growth (For someone who supposedly is always calm the mc’s decisions are all rushed and affer everything that has happened he should have learned from it), and finally just avoid over explaining everything as it just makes all the chapters feel shorter than they are, I don’t a 100 description about something the doesnt really matter... Oh and watch your grammar.
Blood demon leveling
Fantasy · zad1333